posted on May, 18 2016 @ 08:30 AM
Urgh, I have two versions of my story and am agonizing over which one to publish.
A somewhat more minimalistic one.
Sentences written in mock poetry, much like this.
Certainly much more aesthetic, but is the content better?
That, I suppose I will have to decide.
The other version is more verbose and descriptive, but simple things like extra words and longer sentences doesn't necessarily make something
superior. I tend to have problems finding the right tempo and write out far more than I likely should. I'll probably end up going with the first one,
but release the more "typically story-like" one after voting is finished next month.
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