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Living in a world of a world...

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posted on May, 15 2016 @ 09:20 AM
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A world of no more went,
Flying like a dream,
Crying like all lovers do,
Chocking life away,
Sneezing on life,
Being was no to love,
Riding over waves,
Selling sin for soul,
Was not the way to go,
Killing times,
Zip zip minds,
Hiding cries,
Any human telling a lie. Is not walking in your shoes💋.




posted on May, 15 2016 @ 11:48 AM
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dude, all you do is write weird #.

i dont get it man.

whats up with that ?

I mean its cool #, but damn!


You are a good writer tho



posted on May, 15 2016 @ 11:53 AM
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a reply to: IlluminatiDestroyr1211

Thank you friend! You write one now.

This one just meant that people who lie are chocking their life away. So do we all lie? Then are we all chocking our life away. I am not sure.

So the point was to tell the truth and live a clean life and don't sell a sin as a trade for your soul!



posted on May, 15 2016 @ 11:59 AM
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Quantum

Very cool.

This many thumbs up:




posted on May, 15 2016 @ 12:00 PM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

Thanks friend, your up to bat, I can't wait for your next awesome poem.



posted on May, 15 2016 @ 12:03 PM
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IlluminatiDestroyr1211


dude, all you do is write weird *snip*


That's all any writer does. That's the point!




posted on May, 15 2016 @ 12:17 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

great work



posted on May, 15 2016 @ 12:19 PM
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a reply to: kibric

Thank you kindly!



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