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Heya ATS. Wanna help give my poem a title?

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posted on May, 9 2016 @ 12:21 AM
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a reply to: Bobaganoosh

I write poetry professionally. I would call it Lemon Twist.




posted on May, 9 2016 @ 12:23 AM
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Cobaz's is actually not t oo bad. None of the others make any sense at all, in any way shape or form.



posted on May, 9 2016 @ 12:35 AM
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a reply to: reldra

I do like Lemon Twist. It's simple, relative even. I see what you did there.



posted on May, 9 2016 @ 12:37 AM
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a reply to: Sublimecraft

If only Lars wouldn't sue the hell out of me...



posted on May, 9 2016 @ 12:43 AM
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a reply to: reldra

Thank you Reldra,

I am sorry but looking back I realize if I was a kid in this day and age I would have been diagnosed ADD, or ADHD. and the poem looked how close to how I saw things when I was a heavy and I mean a heavy drinker. So I played with the ADD letters and found fitting words that matched both the poem and the attitude an adult who goes hey a squirrel would...



posted on May, 9 2016 @ 12:46 AM
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a reply to: Inarismessenger

In the various locations and forms that I have left it over the years, it will remain nameless.

I suppose I've chosen to name it now out of a combination of boredom and interest where the perceptions of others are concerned.



posted on May, 9 2016 @ 01:11 AM
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a reply to: Bobaganoosh

"put some respeck on it pleighboi"

seems like a great title to me.



posted on May, 9 2016 @ 03:30 AM
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a reply to: Bobaganoosh

'Time's Memories'

I write poems also and I dont usually like other peoples work because it's usually not gloomy enough for me like my stuff (I've been published twice). But this is my style, I like your poem. I too have a few untitled, this thread is a good idea.
edit on 5/9/2016 by Alien Abduct because: (no reason given)



posted on May, 9 2016 @ 04:26 AM
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a reply to: Alien Abduct

Well thanks. I'm glad you like it.

The thread turned out to be a great idea. I've gotten some good responses and laughs.

What more could a guy ask for?



posted on May, 9 2016 @ 05:33 AM
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How about:

Lemon Drop

or

Sweet N Sour


leolady



posted on May, 9 2016 @ 11:29 AM
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Here are a few I could pull out of my hat:

'Lofty breaths upon no place'

'Masks of fate'

'Melodies from (of) beyond'

'Lifted veil no more'

'Tides of a yonder time'

'Farewell figures toward night'

There could be more coming but it might take me some thinking to jive it with your words a lil better.



posted on May, 9 2016 @ 12:02 PM
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If it were mine I'd title it:

"Behind My face The Truth Lies"

Good poem.



posted on May, 9 2016 @ 12:02 PM
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a reply to: Bobaganoosh
One more name: Shadows in the Mind!



posted on May, 9 2016 @ 01:37 PM
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a reply to: Bobaganoosh


I liked it ! For a title, how about....Nostalgic Reverie .



posted on May, 9 2016 @ 02:03 PM
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a reply to: Bobaganoosh

"Fraud"



posted on May, 17 2016 @ 09:41 PM
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For the sake of closure, I'm going with Reldra this time around.

The poem is officially called Lemon Twist. I thought about it at considerable length.

I appreciate all who contributed.

Good day ATS brothers and sisters.



posted on May, 17 2016 @ 10:26 PM
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a reply to: Bobaganoosh

To "TWO" realities which do not exist.

Title - The Days of Whine and Poses



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 01:41 AM
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originally posted by: Bobaganoosh
For the sake of closure, I'm going with Reldra this time around.

The poem is officially called Lemon Twist. I thought about it at considerable length.

I appreciate all who contributed.

Good day ATS brothers and sisters.


I'm glad you chose it



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