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The Old Ones Lament (A poem )

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posted on May, 6 2016 @ 07:00 PM

Once there was a place,
an imaginary space,
where friends met,
and shared grace,
and stepped away,
from the race,
and enjoyed,
a gentile pace.
and invited all,
to interface.

Yet with the new,
changes came,
they didn't know,
the others names.
They laughed and played,
many games,
the pace grew fast,
almost insane.

Although they knew,
not the old songs,
the fact is they,
did nothing wrong.
They had no way to know,
nor could not see,
that the old ones missed,
how it used to be.

edit on 6-5-2016 by Errollorre because: (no reason given)

posted on May, 6 2016 @ 07:22 PM
Wonderful my friend!

posted on May, 6 2016 @ 08:33 PM
a reply to: Errollorre

Nice one Errol!

posted on May, 6 2016 @ 08:35 PM
a reply to: Errollorre

Very well written. And from the heart.


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