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posted on May, 6 2016 @ 04:49 PM
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As is as love does,
The brain of truth is here,
Seeing love was clear,
I felt the pain of love,
Feeling joy to love,
Crying times from above,
Punching bags of life were near,
A tear dripped on my face,
The sky was pink,
I poured you a drink,
A drink for you to taste,
A taste of my soul,
My frozen face,
Warm hands shake,
Lightning of love faces,
Thunder pounds my soul,
Heat drives me in,
Shadows cast my sin away,
Moments with you I enjoy,
So I am seeing my love away




posted on May, 6 2016 @ 06:50 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

There once was a Disney-face, left of my screen,
and I thought to myself, oh what could have been?

A new sort of poet, a God of the 'Nets?
A new Ezra Pound of the great Internets!

Oh f**k, now I used that most blessed word twice,
can I go back and change it, a rhyming device?

No matter, no matter, let bygones be gone,
I guess I'll just swallow this rhyming pogrom

Love's what it is, or what it will be,
or else it's what someone might think it should be

Line breaks and pink texts cause little regrets,
but all of those commas might make a man retch

Now somehow I feel I'm offending you guys
please do not mind, we all pay the price

But if karma is karma then karma be calm
I will pay my price, let this be my psalm



posted on May, 6 2016 @ 06:54 PM
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a reply to: MorganMorgan

Your awesome!!



posted on May, 6 2016 @ 06:56 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Thank you! I really feel welcome on this site now.



posted on May, 6 2016 @ 07:03 PM
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a reply to: MorganMorgan
The feeling of love has arrived



posted on May, 6 2016 @ 07:22 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Thank you. This is a weird question maybe, but in my poem I said your avatar was a Disney-character, for artistic purposes, but I actually believe it was from an Italian animation, about a mermaid, sort like the Disney one, the little mermaid. But for the life of me I can't find it or remember it. That face in your avatar really looks familiar though. What was the animation called?



posted on May, 6 2016 @ 07:30 PM
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a reply to: MorganMorgan

Hello it is from ANASTASIA



posted on May, 6 2016 @ 07:37 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Oh my God, you are right, sorry. I was certain it was from another movie I saw. But that is Dmitri from Anastasia, as you said. I love that movie, but apparently not as much as I thought.



posted on May, 7 2016 @ 06:39 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Hey, I was pretty drunk last night and I thought my poem was funny, but in retrospect I think I was just being a jerk. I'm sorry. Keep writing!



posted on May, 7 2016 @ 07:11 PM
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a reply to: MorganMorgan

I liked your poem, you should copy it and make it a new thread!




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