The Sexyflower within...

The flower within is thin,
The stem of life will begain,

Thickness starts to set-in,
My flower learned to sin,

Like your flower you have a twin,
Your twin has thick skin,

Sometimes life's flowers take a backspin,
Almost all male flowers have removed foreskin (ouch)

My flower moved to Berlin
Now I am alone playing my violin

A lover and a flower need discipline!

edit on 5 6 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)

edit on 5 6 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)

a reply to: Quantum12

Look closely at any flower and some are not merely sexy, but positively obscene, by our modest standards that is.

I enjoy your writings. They often make me smile, this one however reminded me of my favourite Lou Reed song.

a reply to: Anaana
Thank you, I love your song, yes some flowers are really unbearable.

Your turn to write a poem! I will be waiting! Thank you kind person.

a reply to: Quantum12

I'm not sure I could be so cruel as to inflict my attempts at poetry on ATS. I tend only to write poems when I have some defiance that needs to be spat out. I wouldn't want to go darkening your door with that drivel.

I'll think about it, but it'd be wise not to hold your breath.

All the best.

a reply to: Anaana

Anaana, I think you have a hidden talent.

a reply to: Quantum12

Probably, but it is not for poetry, not at the moment anyway. I'm finding myself between words right now.

a reply to: Anaana

I think every human and even not humans have a poem inside.

originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: Anaana

I think every human and even not humans have a poem inside.

I find that most humans have all kinds of talents when they take the time to develop them.

I do write poetry, but only when I am in the mood. I haven't been in the mood for some time, but I am sure one day I will get back to it...just don't, as I said, hold your breath.

a reply to: Anaana
Ok let's get you in the mood.

Write about the long red rose of your life!

a reply to: Quantum12

Persistent ain't ya?

Well, since I would hate to be the one disprove my own theory that persistence pays off, I will give it a go...but in my own time, the wheels are turning though.