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The Sexyflower within...

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posted on May, 6 2016 @ 08:46 AM
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The flower within is thin,
The stem of life will begain,

Thickness starts to set-in,
My flower learned to sin,

Like your flower you have a twin,
Your twin has thick skin,

Sometimes life's flowers take a backspin,
Almost all male flowers have removed foreskin (ouch)

My flower moved to Berlin
Now I am alone playing my violin

A lover and a flower need discipline!



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posted on May, 7 2016 @ 03:40 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Look closely at any flower and some are not merely sexy, but positively obscene, by our modest standards that is.

I enjoy your writings. They often make me smile, this one however reminded me of my favourite Lou Reed song.






posted on May, 7 2016 @ 07:17 AM
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a reply to: Anaana
Thank you, I love your song, yes some flowers are really unbearable.

Your turn to write a poem! I will be waiting! Thank you kind person.



posted on May, 8 2016 @ 01:57 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

I'm not sure I could be so cruel as to inflict my attempts at poetry on ATS. I tend only to write poems when I have some defiance that needs to be spat out. I wouldn't want to go darkening your door with that drivel.

I'll think about it, but it'd be wise not to hold your breath.

All the best.



posted on May, 8 2016 @ 08:27 AM
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a reply to: Anaana

Anaana, I think you have a hidden talent.



posted on May, 11 2016 @ 02:45 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Probably, but it is not for poetry, not at the moment anyway. I'm finding myself between words right now.




posted on May, 11 2016 @ 08:38 AM
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a reply to: Anaana

I think every human and even not humans have a poem inside.



posted on May, 11 2016 @ 02:32 PM
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originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: Anaana

I think every human and even not humans have a poem inside.


I find that most humans have all kinds of talents when they take the time to develop them.

I do write poetry, but only when I am in the mood. I haven't been in the mood for some time, but I am sure one day I will get back to it...just don't, as I said, hold your breath.




posted on May, 11 2016 @ 04:48 PM
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a reply to: Anaana
Ok let's get you in the mood.

Write about the long red rose of your life!



posted on May, 13 2016 @ 03:02 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Persistent ain't ya?

Well, since I would hate to be the one disprove my own theory that persistence pays off, I will give it a go...but in my own time, the wheels are turning though.




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