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The Dark Girl Doom [Pic 2016]

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posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 12:40 AM
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The girl clambered on to the edge and watched the Sun simmer and rise up above the sea air. The waters roared below her and the birds reigned in the air. In front of her the void, and behind her foreign ground to catch her. The birds sang way up above and percussion down below as her hand touched her face and slid down her neck, she was real. Her skin could rival the clouds, but there were none, all shunned by her purity. The Sun reluctant to bathe her and she turned away. To the air she was bare and miserable, to the trees around her she was bare and dark, to my eye she was bare and beautiful, to my desire I grew. Where she stepped the soil turned rotten and crystals of salt appeared ruining the ground. Where she glanced fire razed as the forest burned, burned to the ground. She did not step, she flew her feet barely off the ground. I could not fly like her, stumbled to the ground. She made way to the castle, the King and Queen dead to the smile on her face. The guards entranced chased after her in lust found their throats were cut.

After years flew by the girl did not change, her skin still pale and smooth, her rose still pure and her breasts still rising with the wind. Her lips were blood red, her eyes a dark hue and her hair black rain down her back like silk and some covered her soft breasts. I lived here with her and watched her every step and with every glance, at me! though she did not see a fire burned in me, razed my soul bred in me something I could not forsake.

The King's child, a little daughter, lost some time ago. Her dolls still watched the halls, beheaded by this girl. Their eyes creeped at me raising such fear in me that she could see me dressed in my cambric shirt. But this I knew untrue. One room a shrine the girl hath made, now I know for me. I stepped inside to see her bare once more. The horror, the horror as she threw her eyes at me, oh her ghastly sight one me! In the mirror she saw me, true, I glanced, she turned, run, I could not. I saw in her my one true love lost one time ago, I saw in her skin the beauty that I sought. Her lips called to me. Whispering to steal a kiss. Her breasts rose and her body rose my desire, her smile murderous, but her eyes were cold, turned me to stone unfrozen for a while, briefly set my lips to hers and kissed her, drank the wine. I held her close and firm to me, never felt such ecstasy. Her hands round my neck, her lips still on mine, her breath deep and slow. She kissed me till I fell breathless, all taken from away me and I fell down below her, eyes opened wide in awe. My body crumpled before a statue, an angel of my God to whom I prayed, who I cursed and swore to Him, I'd kiss her all the same.
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posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 12:47 AM
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a reply to: Tiamat384
That's a good entry. Dark fantasy is cool.

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posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 12:49 AM
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a reply to: Skid Mark
Thanks very much! Glad you enjoyed

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posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 12:58 AM
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a reply to: Tiamat384
You're welcome. Thanks for the great story.



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 01:02 AM
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Beautifully written, and quite haunting... I know you're not a great fan of it, but I like it
thank you for writing!



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 01:06 AM
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a reply to: kaelci
I'm really happy you liked it! And nope I am not, almost never am
Thank you!!



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 01:16 AM
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Wonderful! I knew it would be! Beautifully written!



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 01:17 AM
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a reply to: Night Star
Darn it! You found it! Hah, thanks.



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 01:22 AM
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a reply to: Tiamat384

Great job dude.

I have been reading everyone's entries. I enjoyed them all.

You are young, and still have that innocent imagination.


Aunti Kat approves.



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 01:24 AM
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a reply to: crappiekat
Innocent imagination? In what way innocent exactly.

Glad Auntie approves!
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posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 01:45 AM
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a reply to: Tiamat384

With age comes wisdom.

You will see.



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 01:47 AM
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a reply to: crappiekat
With age comes talent!
But really, my mention of the rose should make it clear there isn't innocence.



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 04:00 AM
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Dark DArk DARk DARK DARRRK!!!!!

Where's the LIGHTSWITCH???? arrrgghhh!!!!!

fluffy bunnies..... rose petals...... shiny shiny sunshine.... yes... sunshine.... cuddle teddy.... breathe.... smile.... ahhhh.

Yah, not bad Tiamat. Needs to be darker though? LOL

Well Done!

G



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 04:15 AM
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a reply to: Gordi The Drummer
You're absolutely right. This is far too joyful! Thanks!



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 04:28 AM
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originally posted by: Tiamat384
a reply to: Gordi The Drummer
You're absolutely right. This is far too joyful! Thanks!


ROFL!!!!
...think happy thoughts..... think happy thoughts.....


Thanks again!
G



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 04:30 AM
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a reply to: Gordi The Drummer
The character got to kiss the girl. I think that's happy. See you around.



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 07:25 AM
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Good story!



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 01:07 PM
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a reply to: Errollorre

Thank you!
Happy to hear you enjoyed as with everyone!



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 03:14 PM
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a reply to: Tiamat384

Oh my goodness, that was a dark, romantic tale. I'm nearly blushing.


Wow, you evoke such emotion, that was excellent.


B x



posted on Apr, 12 2016 @ 03:19 PM
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a reply to: beansidhe
Thank you! I rather enjoy dark romance.



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