posted on Apr, 4 2016 @ 04:17 PM
a reply to: Quantum12
You're most welcome, and I do know what you mean. They just appear in your head, ready formed, wanting to be contained on paper somehow.
All her dreams came true. Living in this beautiful place reminds her of all the hope she had. With red and blue flowers blooming all around her she
knew it was almost time. Her place in life was surrounded by beauty of oceans.
I found the juxtaposition interesting; this young, beautiful girl surrounded by vibrant plants, walking in the sun but dreaming of moonlight. I
wondered what it was time for
but then you explained it with the 'RIP'. So I was interested in this young girl, full of colour and life, who
knew that it was soon time to die. And then I wanted to know much more about her - who was she, why was she leaving and so on.
I really enjoyed it, it's always good to read the stories here.