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A poem of love that rhymes contest!

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posted on Mar, 31 2016 @ 09:11 AM
a reply to: jacygirl

Thank you I am fine. The sun wind and stars all give me sunburn. Lol. I will send you a PM

posted on Apr, 2 2016 @ 04:11 AM

originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: TNMockingbird

LOL your silly too TNMockingbird. I will be waiting.
Bring bathing suits tops needed. We have a sunset club
On speedway drive every night and watch the sun go down
With a glass of wine.
Here a a photo taken from the lifeguard stand.

I wish I could print that picture arms-breadth wide and put it on our living room wall. And the other one you posted as well:

This is where you live? That's just so wonderful and you are truly blessed! It's been years since I walked along a sandy beach and watched the waves rolling in. Too many years. But the magic of those moments still reaches out to me.

I dream of going to America some day. Not just for beaches and the sunshine. There are just so many beautiful places there.

Oh, dreams. How would we even live without our dreams to get us through the days?

That's not a poem, sorry. Just thoughts.

edit on 2/4/16 by JustMike because: (no reason given)

posted on Apr, 2 2016 @ 09:43 AM
a reply to: JustMike

You the greatest JustMike come out anytime. Not this week I am in Detroit for 7 days.

posted on Apr, 8 2016 @ 06:24 PM
a reply to: skunkape23

I still love the poem.

posted on Apr, 8 2016 @ 06:48 PM
I'm In Another World With You

I've never gone to Paris.
Or to London to see the palace.
So many places that I would like to view.
But I've no need to be a debtor.
I found something better.
I'm in another world with you.

They say it would really pay us,
to see the Himalayas.
Or watch the Llamas in Peru.
And though these sights beckon,
to me they come in second.
When I'm in another world with you.

There's a light that glows around you.
To me it's so much brighter than the sun.
I hear music from angels singing,
saying of the sights,
you are the only one.

I've never had a chance to visit Venice.
Drive a gondola with menace.
Though that is something that I would like to do.
But if fate won't let us.
If I never live that premise.
I'm in another world with you.

posted on Apr, 8 2016 @ 07:08 PM
a reply to: Errollorre

OMGee, that was amazing well written and I felt like I was in your poem and I am only in a taxi to my hotel. Nice writing once again. My friend.

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