A poem of love that rhymes contest!

a reply to: Quantum12

Waiting on love is not the key.
You must go find it, don't you see?

Search high and low and under trees.
You'll find the one who is the bee's knees.

Perhaps right in front of your face.
Go back to the trail, steps to retrace.

It could be love was there all along.
Hidden within the lyrics of song.

You'll find it soon, we both know.
And when you do, your love will grow.

a reply to: TNMockingbird

Your awesome!!! I love your poem. "Search high and low and under trees"
Just amazing!!! I wonder how you came up with such a unique poem lol.
Have a great evening.

a poem in another language

חלום בשבילך ...

חלמתי השלג היה לך...

בשבילך ...
חלמתי השלג היה לך
בזמן שאנחנו נגדל
חלמתי האור היה לך
עם הזמן יש לנו ראיה
חלמתי המיטה הייתה לך
עם הזמן האדום הגיעה מדי
חלמתי השמש הייתה לך
עם הזמן כיף היה לך
חלמתי חלום מכם
בזמן החלום התגשם
חלמתי אש מכם
עם הזמן הרצון שלי גדל
חלמתי אהבה בשבילך
בזמן היונה עפה
חלמתי מילה עלייך
במשך הזמן הזה אבסורד
חלמתי זעקה עלייך
עם הזמן זה שקר
חלמתי משאלות עלייך

I fell in love, went round the bend

She broke my heart, the end

a reply to: Jonjonj

Nice poem. Your sure got right to the point!!! I love it
Thank you for the great poem

Ah love...
The kind that fits you like a glove
And seems to be sent from above
beautiful as a snow white dove
And thereof love you are Conceived of...

a reply to: Quantum12

There was some other stuff happening as well, but I believe they were the salient points.

originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: TNMockingbird
"Search high and low and under trees"

Well, I AM a bird so...

LOL

YOU have a good night also!

a reply to: 5StarOracle

Wow that is deep. "beautiful like a Snow White dove" nice line
Thank you for your deep poem it is really good and straight from your heart!

a reply to: TNMockingbird

LOL I saw your wings...

a reply to: Jonjonj

I understand the points left out. LOL.

a reply to: Ophiuchus 13

Nice poem. That was deep even gave me chills. Great writing.
Thank you for posting your poem!

a reply to: Quantum12

You are welcome Quantum12, 1 is happy you enjoyed.
Thank you for taking a read, good energy detected within the thread

a reply to: Ophiuchus 13

Your line "When you feel LOVE is not present, perhaps take another glance" is so true to this world of lovers! Well said
Ophiuchus 13!

Bright white light...

You see what you are
You are my shinning star

A light so bright
A light in the night
A light so right

A light that sings
A light that rings

A light of me
A light to be

Of the many colors you are
When your on you'll go far

Your the light I love the most
And your the light I boast

a reply to: jacygirl

What happened to you, was it true I wondered all night
In fright, I was hoping you were ok, the other day we last
spoke you seemed put away from the words you say
I hope today it will be a better day.

a reply to: Quantum12

Hey there!
Don't ever take it personally if I disappear...I get frequent aggressive migraines, and sometimes I'm down for days.

Loved all the poems!
I will try to add another one when my eyes aren't so squinty.

jacy

a reply to: jacygirl

As a person who cares I am sorry about your migraine! I hope you feel better!

a reply to: Quantum12

Hi! Thank you. I'm okay, resurrected from the fire once again, lol.
How are you today, besides sunburnt?

jacy