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A poem of love that rhymes contest!

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posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 04:29 PM
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a reply to: jacygirl

If you weren't so 'smart-assy' I'm not sure we could be such good friends!


Here's one for the both of you...

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Vodka's cheaper than
dinner for two!

(stolen fair and square!)





posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 04:32 PM
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a reply to: jacygirl

TNMockingbird is a great writer as are you! Your so right her poem was so sad.
All poems are so different, your poem came just at the right time. I am sure she
Will understand!!!



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 04:33 PM
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originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: LifeisGrand

My poem is a true story. She did not die. She found something else in life and is leaving me. She did not find another lover or drugs. She was brainwashed by a religion! Sad.


We both know that this was just an excuse..



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 04:34 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

If it's for BOTH of us...shouldn't that be, dinner for 3 ??

Roses are red
and violets are free
but vodka's still cheaper
than dinner for three

Sorry Michael, we're just kidding! We're bad for that.

jacy



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 04:36 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

I have to tell you that you really put words together like no one else.
I thank you for the vodka poem. I might go out later and buy a pint...LOL
Sad but I am alone too on Easter.
You rock.
Thank you, TNMockingbird



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 04:38 PM
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a reply to: jacygirl

Humor is my life
I like bad that way!



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 04:47 PM
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originally posted by: AldarKose

originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: LifeisGrand

My poem is a true story. She did not die. She found something else in life and is leaving me. She did not find another lover or drugs. She was brainwashed by a religion! Sad.


We both know that this was just an excuse..


Thank you for sharing your thoughts!



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 05:29 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

You're welcome!
Friend, let me regale you with my years of experience and wisdom in the Vodka dept....

Vodka lies! Be careful!




posted on Mar, 28 2016 @ 09:31 AM
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A hot girl above...

Your brightness
has lit a hot fire in my heart
for me it is
the earth and sky

Your words
has turned me into your slave
for me it is
your body we lay on

Your tune of life
has the loudest sound to my ear
for me to hear your voice
your voice of reason

Your state of mind
has the meaning of a life time
for me as of now 40 years
your life meant a lot to me!

Your passion
has surrounded my heart
for me it is
your dream,the dream of no more

Your words
have knocked me down
for me it is
your words of wisdom within

Our love awaits as sure as the blue lit sky
Our happiness is the love for each other
Our meeting has yet to happen

It started yesterday with a poem
A poem written in my name
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posted on Mar, 28 2016 @ 10:06 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Hey there!


That was great!
I'm just giving your thread a *bump* so that maybe more writers will see it and add a poem.
Poems are good, lol.

jacy



posted on Mar, 28 2016 @ 10:17 AM
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a reply to: jacygirl

Hi jacy,

I had to edit to add. Lol

Thank you!

I wrote the poem for you! I wrote the poem for a friendship between lost friends!
edit on 3 28 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)



posted on Mar, 28 2016 @ 10:23 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Oh wow, really? Well thank you!!

Now I'm blushing and fumbling for words, lol.
I have to log off shortly to do some errands, but I will check back later to see if anyone else has added some love rhymes!

Friends aren't lost anymore after you find them!

jacy



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posted on Mar, 28 2016 @ 10:30 AM
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a reply to: jacygirl

Hi jacy,

Have a great day!
I am going to the beach for one hour before work!
A friend of mine is a friend for all time

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posted on Mar, 28 2016 @ 10:32 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Oh, I'm jealous! Enjoy the beach!
You have a great day too!
I will be back this afternoon...maybe work on another rhyme.

jacy



posted on Mar, 28 2016 @ 02:15 PM
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Always should I poem.

I should always love withal
In deepeness I had the withdrawal

I should always be the same
Times like this were insane

I should always know your name
You were riddled with shame

I should always love again
You taught me love when I was ten

I should always dream
I didn't think you would turn out so mean



posted on Mar, 28 2016 @ 02:21 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Well that wasn't a happy ending!


Maybe this will cheer you up. I had some time to kill, lol...so I wrote a poem using all the member names of the people who replied in this thread. It's dumb....just hopefully amusing.

Quantum wrote a thread, it's true...
Then lost girl added her limerick too,

East 069's was short yet deep...
And kaelci's poem near made me weep,

Then LifeIsGrand erased his out...
It was likely good, I have no doubt,

Wee skunkape went traditional...
Glove Love from soloprotocol,

Romantic stuff from Mod JustMike...
lord sword's don't rhyme but that's alright

Now talent is what this guy has...
A heartfelt piece by RoScoLaz,

A sad rhyme came from forthelove...
And Quantum thanked those named above,

Then TNM wrote loving praise...
To her sweet Mom and olden days,

So jacy's post seemed out of place...
She wanted to restore the grace,

To a thread for poems of love and cheer...
This rhyme was made for everyone here!

jacy



posted on Mar, 28 2016 @ 02:27 PM
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Ok I don't know what to say. Your mind is so brilliant! Your poem goes way beyond any poem!

Your a very talented, creative and beautiful person!!!

For me my poem was happy. A bad person in my life set me free!

Your the best, jacy

Best writing ever
"So jacy's post seemed out of place...
She wanted to restore the grace," by jacy

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edit on 3 28 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)



posted on Mar, 28 2016 @ 02:35 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Lol, aww thank you! Sheez, I don't think I've ever been called 'briliant' before.


I'm glad you're poem was happy...and that mine amused you.
I just love rhyming....I'm weird like that.

jacy



posted on Mar, 28 2016 @ 05:27 PM
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a reply to: jacygirl

A poem for you. Poem

A sound in your voice
A sound of choice

A kiss in your ear
A kiss you would share

A lover in the night
A lover with a bite

A tear in her eye
A tear you cry

A touch of lust
A touch you can trust

A feeling of bliss
A feeling not to miss

A warm hand on your ______
A warm touch is the best

A life we share
A life of dare

A glass of wine
A glass oh so fine

A bed of might
A bed of delight

A lovers light
I kiss you good night
edit on 3 28 2016 by Quantum12 because: I made a boo boo



posted on Mar, 28 2016 @ 07:21 PM
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a reply to: jacygirl

Your poem is perfect just like you.
You seem to make me no longer blue.

As I read away with time to kill.
I long for acronyms...never still.

To jump the canyon in the Thunderbird.
And always remember those last words.

"We're gonna die, Louisa, holy crap"!
"We should have looked at the goshdarn map"!







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