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A poem of love that rhymes contest!

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posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 01:12 PM
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The Dove of Love Glove.

Upon a hill there sat a dove
I'm sure it was a sign of love
Then all of sudden appeared an Eagle
And up jumped biscuit my English Beagle

The Eagle dived as Biscuit sprinted
The race was on the Dove just squinted
with gnashing teeth and talons pointed
The dove of love was disappointed

with savage intent they both tore that Dove
And from the Skin i made a Glove..The end.



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posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 01:34 PM
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a reply to: Soloprotocol

LOL LOL LOL. Your poem is so funny!!! Do you still have the glove? Thank you for sharing your poem. I hope many people read it!!!



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 01:42 PM
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originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: Soloprotocol

LOL LOL LOL. Your poem is so funny!!! Do you still have the glove? Thank you for sharing your poem. I hope many people read it!!!

Ha, No glove. just a crazy imagination. Cheers.



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 01:51 PM
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a reply to: Soloprotocol

Your poem is so good, you need to publish it.



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 02:04 PM
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I am not sure how it really rhymes but its my first try at a love poem.

Love how do you know it
without giving it away
you can never hold on to it
without it going cold
to keep it warm you have to give it away
without anything in return
Some times it is the hardest thing we can do
Is to giving it away
The world wants us to hold it in place
to embrace the cold
The warmest thing to do is be the light for the world
To share it
you might get the greatest gift of all.



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 02:10 PM
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a reply to: lord sword

For a first Love poem you did great. "without giving it away you can never hold on to it"!!!
Such great writing. Thank you!!!



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 02:16 PM
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where the heart sails
and language fails
where hearts are broken
there love is spoken
islands of hope
in a sea of self-pity
love so remote
so remembered
so pretty



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 02:21 PM
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a reply to: RoScoLaz4

Awesome poem!!! "islands of hope" beautiful! Your poem brought back a great memory in my life and I thank you!



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 02:27 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

thank you kindly



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 03:12 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

You gave me a shove,
With your silky glove,
Then pulled the rug out,
And gave me a pout,
I did not give up,
I drank from the cup,
Like honey from a bee,
My eyes refused to see,
Try as you may,
To keep me at bay,
There will be an end,
Where I will mend,
When the flight of the dove
Will shower me with love.



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 03:16 PM
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a reply to: forthelove

Your poem is so deep. I love the end "When the flight of the dove Will shower me with love"
That is such a great ending. Thank you so much for sharing you poem.



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 03:17 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Is it required to be a poem of 'romantic' love?
Great thread BTW...your poem is fantastic...

The others are as well.




posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 03:22 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

I am undeserving LOL! Any poem is always welcome! Anything that comes from your heart. I know you are a excellent writer!!! I look foreword to reading your poem!
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posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 03:52 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

You put a lot of pressure on one, don't you? I rather think you enjoy it!
LOL

Spring was light and warm and new.
The flowers bloomed and birds sang songs to you.
As we walked through the meadows you tried to show me
things that would happen and I was unable to see.

Summer came and our world was on fire.
You showed me to fight for the things I desired.
The sky was clear an Azure blue
and it left me unable to see what was happening to you.

Fall was upon us and the crisp cool air.
Now I was unable to question, I wouldn’t dare.
What’s happening to you and the things around us?
The leaves are turning brown and crumbling to dust.

Here in the winter of my Mother’s life, I am still…finally.
She has found peace but I cannot so... easily.
The world is a cold, dark, and lonely place.
The only salvation was in her beautiful face.





posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 03:55 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

It's Easter Sunday, I'm alone
and nobody has called my phone

No ham and taters with the fam
a tuna sandwich, nothing glam

But I logged on, and you are here
I'm happy like I found free beer

Now not alone, I'm typing fast
just hope this inspiration lasts

So I can say, from me to you
I'm feeling love, indeed it's true

Not like a girlfriend, good grief no
but love like kinship, bro to ho (lol)

Now Happy Easter, I must say
to Quantum12, you made my day!

jacy



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 03:58 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

I am sorry for your loss!
As I said I love your writing from your own threads. Your poem has brilliant turns.
The end got me good!!! I know your poem was from deep down in your heart.
Thank you for writing such a deep poem. I am sorry I pressured you! LOL



posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 04:05 PM
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a reply to: jacygirl

OMG!!! Your poem is so so amazing!!! This is not your first poem is it lol.
Your poem just made us good friends.
When we meet bring all your pens.
I have to say you made my day.
Now I will go and pray, neigh!

Your poem is so upbeat this is the 3rd time reading your words. You gave me a big smile.
I thank you! Your a wonderful person!!!

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posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 04:12 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Ohhh thank you!!! Yes, any rhymer is a friend of mine!


I've always written poems and rhymes, for as long as I can remember.
When I saw your thread title I actually thought it was for a new fiction contest here, lol.
As soon as I started reading that you wanted poems, I was hooked.

So nice to meet you! I'm,
jacy


Oh, and it's actually all true. I'm alone here, eating a tuna sandwich for my Easter supper and just logged on.



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posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 04:19 PM
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a reply to: jacygirl

Nice to meet you too! My name is Michael.

Tuna is my friend until the end.
All I have to say is your poem
made my day!!!
I am grateful to you in every way
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posted on Mar, 27 2016 @ 04:25 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Hi Michael,


I actually wanted to write a reply to TNMockingbird (who is a good friend of mine)...saying that I was sorry my off-the-cuff smart-assy rhyme followed her heart-felt loving poem to her Mom.
The timing was awful...like bad karma.

Anyways, awesome that so many people have participated so far...hope there will be lots more. Everyone has their own style, and I love reading them all.

jacy




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