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Let's Get this Party Started [ORI2016] (Writer)

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posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 03:53 PM
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"Come on! Let's get this party started already."

"Be patient. These things take time."

"You've been at this for centuries. Give it up."

"I've got this. Watch."

"Here, let me help."

"Oh, look what you made me do. You spoiled it."

"Patience, brother. Watch."

"Oh, look! Something's happening."

"What should we call the round things?"

"We'll call them planets. That sounds like a good word. Oh, look! We'll call these tall green things trees. Look at all that green!"
"Look at those things wandering around and eating them. Watch. This will be cool."

"What are those big things? Why, they're wreaking havoc on what I built."

"Let's call them dinosaurs. Anyway, it's no problem, brother. Check this out. I'll throw a comet at them."

"Look how much damage you did."

"They're gone, just like you wanted it. Look at these things. We'll call them humans. They think they're so clever, don't they?"

"I don't know, they're interesting. Look at that. I think they're aware of us. What are they doing?"

"Why, I think they're worshiping us! How silly! Let's listen to them."

"...and he is the only God. All other gods are false and their followers will be slain if they refuse to convert. God commands it!"

"Damn it! They're ruining everything, slaughtering each other like that. It's so needless. I don't want them to do that!"

"I'll punish them. Here, I'll spread a plague. That should do the trick."

"Wow! You wiped thousands of them out!"

"You try it. You'll like it."

"Well, okay. I'll make that volcano destroy the village over there. You're right. I really liked that."

"It looks like they recovered in the centuries while we've been talking. They really do think they're clever. Look at the machines they're using."

"Yeah, but what they're doing with them has me concerned. They're still killing each other. Did you see that? They just erased thousands with one big blast! They really are viscous creatures."

"True, but look at the others that help each other. Anyway, let's just wait and watch a while, brother. I think they're entertaining. I can always punish them later."

END
edit on 1-3-2016 by Skid Mark because: Color change




posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 04:14 PM
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a reply to: Skid Mark

I think you just highlight the part (sentence) you want teal, click copy, go up and click the teal and paste it...in the box that comes up

Test
edit on 1-3-2016 by TNMockingbird because: see above



posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 04:17 PM
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....to be continued?



posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 04:50 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird
Thank you!



posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 04:51 PM
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a reply to: intergalactic fire
That's it. Sorry.



posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 05:04 PM
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a reply to: Skid Mark

Hello there, that was really,really good with only the dialogue to go on. I like listening to plays, so a big
from me.

B x

(and a S&F too)




posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 05:20 PM
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a reply to: Skid Mark

Well darn.
But you are probably right to call it the end, history and sci-fi doesn't work well together



posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 05:55 PM
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a reply to: beansidhe
Thank you! I just wanted to experiment a little.



posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 05:56 PM
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a reply to: intergalactic fire
I decided to end it there, as the party is still going.



posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 06:04 PM
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a reply to: Skid Mark

I'm just glad you're alive after the fairy 'advice'.


Seriously, great story. I particularly loved the indifference of the creators - a wee bit unsettling.



posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 06:15 PM
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I liked it. I've liked all the things I've seen your write so far.



posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 06:17 PM
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a reply to: Errollorre
Thank you. You're really good yourself.



posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 09:16 PM
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I liked it too Skid! Interesting take on things!



posted on Mar, 1 2016 @ 09:49 PM
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a reply to: Night Star
Thank you. I was letting my dogs out earlier and the story just popped into my head. I remembered seeing something about the contest so here it is.



posted on Mar, 2 2016 @ 08:43 AM
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a reply to: Skid Mark

Good Job Bro! Well done!! S+F!


Syx...



posted on Mar, 2 2016 @ 10:40 AM
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a reply to: SyxPak
Thanks, man.How's it going?



posted on Mar, 2 2016 @ 05:53 PM
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Well done Skiddy!!
I like it!
G



posted on Mar, 2 2016 @ 10:14 PM
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a reply to: Gordi The Drummer
Thank you. How are you tonight?



posted on Mar, 3 2016 @ 03:32 AM
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a reply to: Skid Mark

Difficult to answer that without breaching the T&C's!
Not very good is the polite answer!! LOL

G



posted on Mar, 3 2016 @ 11:26 AM
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a reply to: Gordi The Drummer
You got it coming out of both ends or is it Jello in the lungs?

Get better, man.
edit on 3-3-2016 by Skid Mark because: (no reason given)



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