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[ORI2016] Simply The Universe

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posted on Feb, 26 2016 @ 06:27 PM
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Simply The Universe [ORI2016]

Since the time when men became self aware on the planet earth,
they have speculated and wondered at how the universe and their world began.

Every civilization and culture that sprung up in ancient times had their own story and explanation for the origin of the universe and Earth.

Religions gave credit to god's.
Myths arouse using symbolic beings represented by common creatures to illustrate their part in cosmically creating and watching over life on Earth.

Science eventually proposed a spontaneous explosion in the nothingness,
created time and space, filling it with all matter and evolving into high forms.

Yet the mystery of creation of the known universe has remained until now.
Now you are able to……

“JEO!” “What are you doing? a voice called out from another room.
“Nothing Dad.” said Jeo. “Just playing a game.”
“What game?” said Jeo’s father as he entered and stood beside the boy.”
“I thought I heard the voice of a game narrator.”
“No Jeo. I told you never play this game unless you check with me first”
“I have to make sure you play in your own file.”

“Aw Dad”, said Jeo, “that will take too long.
You’ve got all that neat stuff set up in your game.”
“It will take me forever to make my universe look that cool.”
“Well Jeo that’s the point of the game.
A slow and steady build until,
oh my you unchecked disasters in my file!
You did that last time and wiped out the dinosaurs!”

“Ok here’s a new file for you to play with.
How do you want to start?
Sudden explosion, slow evolution, alien implantation?”

“Never mind Dad I’m going outside to play.”


non-writer
edit on 26-2-2016 by Errollorre because: added the words "non-writer" at the end so you don't have to.




posted on Feb, 26 2016 @ 07:27 PM
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a reply to: Errollorre

That was indeed a short story...
But very good also...
Guess what?
you are not a non writer...



posted on Feb, 26 2016 @ 07:57 PM
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a reply to: 5StarOracle

Thank you. I appreciate that.



posted on Feb, 26 2016 @ 08:48 PM
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a reply to: Errollorre

Erroll! S+F for a Fantastic Tale of Origin!! I Love it!

I just logged in for a minute here to comment on this! Great job Man!

(Catch Ya at The Shed 3 in the morn...)
Syx...
edit on 26-2-2016 by SyxPak because: (no reason given)



posted on Feb, 27 2016 @ 04:15 AM
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YAY!
Well Done Errol!!

and Eerily similar to an Idea I had a while back, about the Earth just being a board game of the gods!

I really liked your take on this.

Thanks for joining in the fun and mischief!


G



posted on Feb, 27 2016 @ 10:20 AM
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originally posted by: SyxPak
a reply to: Errollorre

Erroll! S+F for a Fantastic Tale of Origin!! I Love it!

I just logged in for a minute here to comment on this! Great job Man!

(Catch Ya at The Shed 3 in the morn...)
Syx...


Thanks Syx. Your story is great.



posted on Feb, 27 2016 @ 10:21 AM
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originally posted by: Gordi The Drummer
YAY!
Well Done Errol!!

and Eerily similar to an Idea I had a while back, about the Earth just being a board game of the gods!

I really liked your take on this.

Thanks for joining in the fun and mischief!


G


Thank you Gordi.
I really enjoyed your story.



posted on Feb, 27 2016 @ 10:27 AM
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a reply to: Errollorre

Hey Errol!
That was great! I like your writing style.

It's always interesting to see what direction people go in during these contests. (and no two stories are ever even similar)

S&F
jacy



posted on Feb, 27 2016 @ 10:38 AM
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a reply to: Errollorre

You are Welcome My Friend! And Thank You!
...



posted on Feb, 27 2016 @ 10:44 AM
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originally posted by: jacygirl
a reply to: Errollorre

Hey Errol!
That was great! I like your writing style.

It's always interesting to see what direction people go in during these contests. (and no two stories are ever even similar)

S&F
jacy




Thank you Jacy!
Your story was fantastic!
Thanks again.



posted on Feb, 27 2016 @ 02:54 PM
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Interesting take! After the story entries you have made at the shed alone you deserve writer's status for sure!!!!



posted on Feb, 27 2016 @ 03:38 PM
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originally posted by: Night Star
Interesting take! After the story entries you have made at the shed alone you deserve writer's status for sure!!!!


Thank you Night.

Many think I deserve something. That's what worries me. lol



posted on Feb, 27 2016 @ 04:34 PM
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a reply to: Errollorre

Hi there, good story.
It's really that simple - we're at the mercy of some child's dexterity with a mouse? Please no.


S&F&

B x



posted on Feb, 27 2016 @ 04:54 PM
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originally posted by: beansidhe
a reply to: Errollorre

Hi there, good story.
It's really that simple - we're at the mercy of some child's dexterity with a mouse? Please no.


S&F&

B x


Thank you.
And I hope not also.



posted on Feb, 28 2016 @ 03:19 PM
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a reply to: Errollorre

cool take on our origins !
great story

good luck



posted on Feb, 28 2016 @ 05:55 PM
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originally posted by: cosmickat
a reply to: Errollorre

cool take on our origins !
great story

good luck


Thank you!



posted on Mar, 3 2016 @ 11:00 AM
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a reply to: Errollorre
I love "short" stories! Well done. I agree with others you are not a nonwriter.!
S/F



posted on Mar, 3 2016 @ 12:08 PM
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a reply to: grayeagle

I thank you very much.



posted on Mar, 15 2016 @ 11:09 PM
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a reply to: Errollorre

Nice Writing!



posted on Mar, 16 2016 @ 07:19 AM
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a reply to: awareness10

Thank you! I appreciate it.



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