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posted on Dec, 15 2015 @ 10:47 PM
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I...

DIE,
LIE,

COULD,
WOULD,

WON'T,
DON'T,

SEE,
FLEE,

WALK,
TALK,

WRITE,
FIGHT,

CRUSH,
FLUSH,

STOOP,
SCOOP,

PUTT,
SHUT,

HEAR,
FEAR,

SWEAR,
SHARE,

SHAKE,
QUAKE,

SHIVER,
QUIVER.





posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 03:06 AM
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a reply to: soulpowertothendegree

I scoop and stoop, I putt and shut. Or do I?

I'm sorry, but what's going on?

I'm so confused.



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 03:10 AM
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Yeah me too...

what rhymes with drink?




posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 11:37 AM
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a reply to: soulpowertothendegree

This is a short story?????

This is an example of why the education system in the US need serious work.



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 11:59 AM
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a reply to: thesaneone

No it is a poem and you have no brain so not expecting you to GET it.



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 12:00 PM
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a reply to: soulpowertothendegree

Should it not be right fight?



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 12:00 PM
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a reply to: Akragon

CLINK!



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 12:01 PM
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a reply to: DeepThoughtCriminal

I suspect confusion is normal for you!



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 12:02 PM
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a reply to: midicon

No...unless you are deciding to re-write my OP.



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 12:04 PM
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a reply to: soulpowertothendegree

Don't get all mad pumpkin you are the one who offered yourself to criticism.



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 12:05 PM
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a reply to: soulpowertothendegree

I was comparing the last letters of each line. Although I suppose putt and shut don't run true either.
Hey it's all good.

midicon



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 12:16 PM
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a reply to: soulpowertothendegree

This is really, pretty cool. The way we learn to use words, perhaps from school...
As I leave the ground and fly into the sky, some have asked Me , "How and Why?"
"With wings and simply because I can."
Ahh the joy of being a Dragon, and not a man...
Syx...



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 03:24 PM
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a reply to: thesaneone

It's a poem, not a short story. There is quite a bit of poetry in this forum.



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 03:26 PM
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originally posted by: Akragon
Yeah me too...

what rhymes with drink?



Shrink



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 05:06 PM
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a reply to: thesaneone

Nope, you decided to criticize and I ain't no pumpkin. I think you opened yourself to be shut down, don't worry pig, I am quite capable.



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 05:07 PM
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a reply to: midicon

Putt around and shut the drawers? Thanks for ANALyzing.



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 05:08 PM
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a reply to: LSU0408

And I am sure yours has been very busy!



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 05:09 PM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

Yeah...I even suggested to TPTB and promptly told me this was sufficient. Everyone is a critic though huh?



posted on Dec, 16 2015 @ 05:10 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Dr. Seuss made millions the same way, right?



posted on Dec, 17 2015 @ 10:57 AM
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a reply to: soulpowertothendegree

Yes You are correct there! I hope You didn't think I made fun of Your Poem at all as that was NOT My intent at all by My reply. In fact I Loved it!!!...
It so Inspired Me that My first sentence in said reply turned out to be the start of the Poem I ended up with!!!...
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