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From hell's own tomb

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posted on Dec, 5 2015 @ 10:07 AM
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Ummm...not so touchy feely with this one...no sir...there be hooks here...


From hell's own tomb


There is a blackness
in the souls of certain ones
An ugly dark
that swallows all the light
That stages evil moods
against the good
Then peels away the sun
to leave the night

There is a breach
unto the underworld
A leprous break
that crosses times harsh void
From this creeps
a coldness thick with fear
To thread it's way through life
without a noise

There is a fetid breath
from hell's own tomb
A horrid chill
that clutches at the heart
That empties bleak
a person from his will
A puppet here to play
This human part



As Roger Zelazny once said..."Here there be dragons"...


YouSir




posted on Dec, 5 2015 @ 11:43 AM
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Awesome!!!!!



posted on Dec, 5 2015 @ 01:54 PM
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a reply to: Night Star


Ummm...thank you Light Star...




YouSir



posted on Dec, 5 2015 @ 01:59 PM
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a reply to: YouSir

You should make a book of your poems. They are very good indeed.



posted on Dec, 5 2015 @ 02:05 PM
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a reply to: YouSir

I love this one, wow!



posted on Dec, 5 2015 @ 03:08 PM
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a reply to: swanne


Ummm...hello Swanne...I would much rather try to puzzle out your theories on integration than seek public acknowledgement...
infinitely less painful and much more satisfying...BTW...you should publish beyond your blog...you have a very intriguing mind...and I am proud to call you friend...

Be well in all that you do...




YouSir



posted on Dec, 5 2015 @ 03:16 PM
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a reply to: geezlouise


Ummm...hello Louise...(I dropped the self denunciation modifier)...


Thank you...although this is one of my least favorite poems I've written...it does have a certain connotation that rings true...
Kinda sad though when you look at some of the PTB and they remind you of sith...or Bilbo Baggins when he had his "my precious" freak on...

Much strength to you...

Be well my friend...


YouSir



posted on Dec, 5 2015 @ 03:48 PM
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a reply to: YouSir

be human



posted on Dec, 5 2015 @ 08:03 PM
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originally posted by: swanne
a reply to: YouSir

You should make a book of your poems. They are very good indeed.


I keep saying the same thing!



posted on Dec, 5 2015 @ 09:25 PM
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a reply to: rajas


Ummm...hello Rajas...NO thank you...I'm going to have to refuse that request...it's cloyingly hard to fit that particular skin over my energetic bodies...

Be well my friend




YouSir




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