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Fan the reaches

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posted on Nov, 10 2015 @ 06:20 AM
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Ummm...the following is not really so much about reincarnation into your spirit animal...as it is...well...I'm sure you can figure it all out...


Fan the reaches


I seek to fan the reaches as on wing
From my throat majestic notes would sing

I cannot convey with fullness how absurd
If I should die and then become a bird

In my dreams I fly without a wing
Aloft with neither artifice or string

I yearn above and then behold the ground
Recedes beneath with only breath for sound

This wind I breathe in passing is no more
Above the all I hover and adore


This is how it always is in my dreams...I yearn to fly and there I am...soaring above all the tribulation...almost as if it had no hold on me

Almost...


YouSir




posted on Nov, 10 2015 @ 11:00 AM
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Wonderful!



posted on Nov, 11 2015 @ 07:25 AM
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a reply to: Night Star


Ummm...thank you Night Star...I'm glad you liked it...

Be well my friend...



YouSir



posted on Nov, 11 2015 @ 07:30 AM
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a reply to: YouSir

You sir, have a fine talent.



posted on Nov, 11 2015 @ 10:30 AM
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a reply to: midicon


Ummm...thank you Midicon...that is a very nice thing to say to me...may I respond by saying that you as well have talent to match whatever grace has bestowed upon me...if such be...

When we are honest with one another...it is impossible to think of one in any better light than any other...
If I may...I would name you friend...

Be well...





YouSir



posted on Nov, 11 2015 @ 11:50 AM
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a reply to: YouSir

Thank you for those kind words. Your balance and equanimity are something I can only aspire to. I have added you as a friend. Now all I need is the confidence to post something of my own.

You write beautifully.

Regards Midicon.

Edit to add...

I do have a talent (perhaps not so rare), that is, I can recognise 'true' poetry, for want of a better word. I say that with no intention of slight or disparagement to others. I like words that are evocative, that touch me through metaphor. The words chosen too. Perhaps there is recognition of that self same enchantment. I once wrote a poem that held the line 'The everlasting song the poet sang'. I think you sing that song.


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posted on Nov, 11 2015 @ 02:02 PM
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a reply to: midicon

That was beautiful! I would love to see you post your poetry!



posted on Nov, 11 2015 @ 08:55 PM
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originally posted by: Night Star
a reply to: midicon

That was beautiful! I would love to see you post your poetry!



Thank you Night Star, you too are very kind. Sadly my talent, and I say 'talent' with tongue in cheek, is one of recognition not composition.




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