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posted on Oct, 31 2015 @ 10:14 AM
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Ummm...Have you ever been caged...locked behind that steel door in payment of transgression...?

I have...


Marriage


The Holy Spirit spoke to me
This place some call a jail
Could with faith my spirit free
That good alone prevail

Through my wonderment discern
How pure this precious gift
What depth is faith my thoughts concern
While me you do uplift

So in humble thanks I ask
I pray that while I share
That you be equal to the task
That you become aware

So hold a marriage in your heart
That you may find reprieve
Walk with the Spirit not apart
That others may believe

You see my friends I did learn my lesson...I wrote some other poems during my stay there and will be sharing them here as well...

Thank you


YouSir




posted on Oct, 31 2015 @ 06:35 PM
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a reply to: YouSir


TextYou see my friends I did learn my lesson...I wrote some other poems during my stay there and will be sharing them here as well...

Not trying to be mean spirited but scroll the forums and click onto "Short Stories." Short Stories" forum really appreciates your type of work and you will get great response from them. Take a look and read some of the work from these talented people and I think you will agree that you will fit right in with them. You have a gift that should not be wasted on this forum. My best to you---



posted on Nov, 1 2015 @ 07:31 AM
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a reply to: Seede


Ummm...Hello Seede...Thank you for your kind words...I usually spend most of my time in the "Short Stories" forum...
irrespective of that I am posting this here in this forum because like any other Thread here it is a communication pertaining to this forum's premise...

This thread even though poetical in nature deals with a very real incidence of incarceration and the strength found there from prayer and seeking...

I know your thoughts were well intentioned, and I truly appreciate that...

Be well my friend...




YouSir
edit on 1-11-2015 by YouSir because: I felt the need...



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