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Sighs of wonder

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posted on Oct, 26 2015 @ 07:06 AM
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Ummm...hello once again...Here are some more of my thoughts that I wrote down...here's to relating...


Mime


They are scarred and worn these hands of mine
Who so like beings all their own
Can either fight or bring to light
A beauty they had not been shown

So like laughter they would move
In humors own persuasive way
To bold express in glad largesse
A drama that no tongue could play


Recompense


Time has cast a firm reflection on my life
Jiggered forth the pains of growth in silence
Marking each and everyone despite ourselves
Yet aging is our only recompense

My heartbeat like the ticking of a clock
Confirms the minutes and the bygone hours
Ironic that at birth they pass cigars
While only comes your funeral send you flowers


Perhaps


Alas and is it only as I sleep
That I can touch perfection and it's worth
Yet fades so fleet when waking comes
the dream
I again a captive of this earth
Still then behold perhaps a single smile
A glimpse of shy perfection I am sure
That breathes belief
where faith had never breathed
A sigh of wonder
that I could endure


Time and dream exit dream time...........OR...a persistent line of drool disappears into the pillow case...hmmm...





YouSir
edit on 26-10-2015 by YouSir because: I wanted to...?




posted on Oct, 26 2015 @ 07:18 AM
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a reply to: YouSir



Time has cast a firm reflection on my life
Jiggered forth the pains of growth in silence
Marking each and everyone despite ourselves
Yet aging is our only recompense



Truth in poetry so often reflects life

Nice stuff



posted on Oct, 26 2015 @ 06:58 PM
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a reply to: redoubt


Ummm...thank you Redoubt...

Be well...


YouSir



posted on Oct, 28 2015 @ 07:52 PM
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a reply to: YouSir


Ummm...sorry my little poems...Nobody likes you overmuch...Sokay...Redoubt likes you...and...I absolutely LOVE you...




Yousir



posted on Oct, 28 2015 @ 08:40 PM
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I like your poems too. Lol. Have you ever thought of doing short stories or longer poems. They were brief but poetic and emotional. They have forums here if you want to take up a pen and write something. I liked your thread title," sighs of wonder" . Some people may not take the time with everything going on here about aliens and Donald Trump and the illuminati to appreciate art. We all strive for things , master your craft....if you want . I am hoping for " gasps of wonder" with my art.



posted on Oct, 29 2015 @ 10:05 PM
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I like all of'em too...YesSir!

Such a way with words yo. When I read exceptional art it makes me happy. I am totally smiling.

Be well YouSir



posted on Oct, 30 2015 @ 08:32 AM
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a reply to: Silenthill666007


Ummm...hello Silent...They also have a forum here for sharing your art work...I would be glad to be the shareee of your work...

My above post was purely "tongue in cheek"...although it worked now didn't it...?

Thank you kind Silent...




YouSir



posted on Oct, 30 2015 @ 08:36 AM
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a reply to: yobroop


Ummm...hello again my friend...your response infected me with a smile as well...I know that I am indeed well met...

May your day be filled with blessing Yobroop...




YouSir




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