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posted on Oct, 21 2015 @ 08:03 PM
Ummm...board hog here...

The following is the quintessential culmination of self reflection...the cusp...folded inward that tesseract-esque consideration bloom...


Maturation does not sit well within me
Too closely I know it's tangled layers
The twining of moment near and far
Haphazard knotting of emotion
Half formed hope and muted dream
Breaths exhaled in joy
Simple toils
Caress and musk remembrance
All the small learning's coiled helix-like
Drawing from darkness into blinding singularity
A matrix of sense
A curing of essence
A divine attraction toward maturity

These are the ingredients that entertain reflection...a quantifiable set of circumstance that chance laid out like a grey suit...and I...what is worn all on the inside...


posted on Oct, 22 2015 @ 09:07 AM
a reply to: YouSir
Very well written YouSir

I enjoyed

posted on Oct, 22 2015 @ 07:02 PM
a reply to: natalia

Ummm...Thank you my friend...I'm glad I could share some of my thoughts with you...How was your day...?
Anything surreal happen...?

Cmon...spill the beans...


posted on Oct, 27 2015 @ 02:11 PM
a reply to: YouSir

I looked on my calendar to see what I did happen on the 22nd.. I was keeping my niece and we got to go play at the park. I began writing a poem for the contest but I stopped... Too busy with the lil one and my own boy. Nothing surreal.. Just living and having fun

And I heard this poem and then read it and now I'm sharing it..

"I'm nobody! Who are you?
Are you nobody, too?
Then there's a pair of us -- don't tell!
They'd banish -- you know!

How dreary to be somebody!
How public like a frog
To tell one's name the livelong day
To an admiring bog!"
-Emily Dickinson
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posted on Nov, 2 2015 @ 01:44 PM
a reply to: natalia

Ummm...Hello Nat...I absolutely love Emily Dickinson...Have you ever read any of Edna St Vincent Millay's work...?
You caused a smile to crack this stoic face with that one...

Be well my friend


posted on Nov, 4 2015 @ 01:52 PM
a reply to: YouSir

Howdy again. Emily Dickinson is a great poet! I have not heard of the name you mentioned but I shall look it up.
Hmm.. I had to look up what stoic meant, smiling is a joyous act


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