Offer the bread before you eat

"Do you see the flock, they are taking a walk"; I said to the old man,
"They were given bread, which they do not spread"; The old man looked down as i continued to speak,
"You call yourselves faithful, but you are all hateful."

The old man opened his mouth; Ungrateful, truly despicable, he turned to me and said;
These have no faith, send them a wraith.
Let the wrath, lead a path.
They did not give their first meal, let them now feel the steel.

a reply to: Hyperia

F# Yeah! Selfish bastards... GET THEM!!!

I'm going to crawl out on a limb... Abe's seed?

This is what it sounds like:

Somebody has something you want.
They won't give it.
Kill them.

Is this what you mean?

Because if it is, it is a philosophy that has no place in First World Nations.

a reply to: angeldoll

Share the Pizza slices!

This is hardcore first world philosophy, called the bible, in a secular world it's called socialism, in a Marxist world it's called taxation.

What's the point of offering the bread beforehand if you intend to eat it? I don't mind sharing though, much more sensible.

originally posted by: Hyperia
"Do you see the flock, they are taking a walk"; I said to the old man,
"They were given bread, which they do not spread"; The old man looked down as i continued to speak,
"You call yourselves faithful, but you are all hateful."

The old man opened his mouth; Ungrateful, truly despicable, he turned to me and said;
These have no faith, send them a wraith.
Let the wrath, lead a path.
They did not give their first meal, let them now feel the steel.

quoting to prevent editing.

a reply to: Hyperia


share them or what? "Feel the steel"?

a reply to: angeldoll

This is hardcore first world philosophy, called the bible, in a secular world it's called socialism, in a Marxist world it's called taxation. In a capitalist world it's called freedom and democracy, or you made difference between a fairytale in the short stories forum and the real world.

originally posted by: smurfy
What's the point of offering the bread beforehand if you intend to eat it? I don't mind sharing though, much more sensible.

Well, you won't have a chance, because you will apparently "feel the steel" before you eat your part.

originally posted by: Hyperia
a reply to: angeldoll

This is hardcore first world philosophy, called the bible, in a secular world it's called socialism, in a Marxist world it's called taxation. In a capitalist world it's called freedom and democracy, or you made difference between a fairytale in the short stories forum and the real world.

BS. I know exactly what it is, and so do you.

Insight into the mind of a schizophrenic , interesting

I'm sorry but I don't follow the story.
If there were a paragraph before and after maybe to clarify the meaning of the steel?
Why would they give their FIRST meal?

Thanks!

Meanwhile seemed like a good place for a musical interlude:

hey ponyboy, I just read your "short stories" and like this one they are pimping violence.

I hope you get your anger under control. That stuff causes ulcers you know. And prison.

a reply to: TNMockingbird

That's lovely, TN. : )

I wouldn't have my knickers in a knot if he was talking about 'stealing". But he/she isn't.

a reply to: angeldoll

I know!
"knickers in a knot"...LOL

I agree, it IS lovely Angel...

a reply to: TNMockingbird

I was laughing at myself about "stealing" though. Is there one of us that wouldn't? If I had hungry kids at home with no other way to feed them, yep, I'd be putting on my Ninja suit and workin' the hood! A loaf of bread here, a jar of peanut butter there! lol.

a reply to: angeldoll

Op keeps spamming the short stories section with..........what?

They arent even short stories, they are barely even a legible paragraphs worth of content...

In most other forums on this site, that wouldnt even pass for a thread