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The Backroom- Short Story

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posted on Aug, 24 2015 @ 11:20 PM
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I havn't written a short story in awhile so feedback is always appreciated. Hopefully I have improved since the last time I wrote one.

Unfortunately i cannot copy and paste it in here as the character limit is to low, but here is a link to it on Booksie:

The Backroom

Note: this is a horror story so as you will find out on the link




posted on Aug, 25 2015 @ 03:27 AM
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a reply to: golden23

i was taken into your story right away and you kept me captured all the way. that's what i like when i read something. you'll get the hang of writing with heaps and heaps of practice and reading. i enjoyed your story, keep going!



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