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letting go (poem)

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posted on Jul, 8 2015 @ 03:04 PM
Past, present, future
Intertwine like constellations;
Plaguing all my thoughts,
Diluted concentration.

Paradigms unraveling,
Perfected visions crumbling;
Peace has come, at last,
Yet truth is oh so humbling.

Denied of my desires,
I lie here so bereft;
Memories and scars,
Are all that i have left.

What once was, in the past,
Can never be again;
But closure must come fast,
So that healing can begin.

Pain is an interpretation
Of what words cannot express;
But sorrow changes nothing,
Despite all my distress.

Letting go and moving on...
Not as simple as it seems;
When you haunt my every thought
And i see you in my dreams.

Looking through this tempest,
I see no break in clouds;
Longing for the sun,
But the light, this storm shrouds.

Fate has it's way
Of teaching what is needed;
It never wages wars,
Yet i feel so defeated.

As time moves along
I can't help but come to see;
That what is meant to be,
Isn't meant for us to see.

posted on Jul, 8 2015 @ 03:17 PM
That was a great poem and from the heart!

posted on Jul, 8 2015 @ 03:22 PM
Beautiful poem.

posted on Jul, 8 2015 @ 03:39 PM
Reading that, hit home for me. Sums up what i went through over the past 6 months

posted on Jul, 8 2015 @ 04:12 PM
a reply to: ICEKOHLD

Excellent poem. I really felt that one, thanks for letting us read it!

posted on Jul, 9 2015 @ 01:27 AM
a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

your poem is really expressive, you have a knack for writing

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