Very confusing I feel I know this song with the same voice from a long time ago early 2000 or so. I actually know some of the words.
I think you may be confusing it with 'drops of Jupiter' by train
Now that she's back in the atmosphere
With drops of Jupiter in her hair, hey, hey, hey
She acts like summer and walks like rain
Reminds me that there's a time to change, hey, hey, hey
Since the return from her stay on the moon
She listens like spring and she talks like June, hey, hey, hey
Hey, hey, hey
But tell me, did you sail across the sun?
Did you make it to the Milky Way to see the lights all faded
And that heaven is overrated?
Tell me, did you fall for a shooting star–
One without a permanent scar?
And did you miss me while you were looking for yourself out there?
Great song actually and had a little more depth to it.
I have such particular taste in music I didn't like it as I considered I might. Perhaps if they got the vocal tempo sorted, it sounds too staccato
and doesn't flow well, sort of jumpy stop start. She has a nice voice, but it isn't my preference to listen to soft womens voices in songs.
They could probably be 50% improved with the right direction, I see it a lot, basic ingredients there but not used to their best.
No doubt, they have talent and there are people that like their stuff, it was just some constructive criticism, I think they could do better.
I do understand that people don't like even constructive criticism though. I teach art and the looks I get when I suggest ways of improving the
drawing /painting skills of students sometimes is not a look of thanks, but it is said in a nice way and for their own development, those that take
the advice, see improvements. People have to be open to learning instead of thinking they 'got it all down to a T' when they don't, it is a form of
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Yep I hear you on that! I don't mind being critisied about my writing short stories and poems. It does help to develope a better way of putting down
those letters! LOL!! Kudos to you for being a Teacher. I see that as one of the best sources of Joy in ones life. To help guide a mind to a better
world is awesome! Thank You for doing your part!!!
Thanks. We are all learning, even the experts. The old masters of art were trained, despite their immense talent. Collectively, humanity has to get
back to master craftsmanship and excelling at skills to move forward, sometimes it's all in the detail. Appreciating aesthetics and quality art,
literature and music expands the mind and enables higher order thinking.
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Very Well Said! I am one for details. They are not present in My writings as much as I'd like and am working on that. I get so picky about details
here at home it drives My wife, and prob our older kids crazy!!! LOL! Perfectionist Perhaps? LOL!!!
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