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When that Night comes (Poem)

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posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 12:27 PM
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A new style for a new me. Hope you enjoy.


In my arms I’ll hold you my dear sweet love.
In your eyes I’ll stare for all eternity.
Your lips so soft I’ll kiss and never stop.
In your arms is the only place I want to be.

We’ll look up at the stars right above us.
We’ll hear the noise of the night.
I’ll keep you close next to my heart.
I know that it would feel to right

Million stars looking down, and us looking up,
The time will stand still just for us.
From all over the world, I finally found you,
The only one that could add to me a plus.

I cannot wait for that sweet night,
The night only you and me away.
Away we shall go to celebrate our love,
I wait for that night every single day.

But for not till then I will keep you close,
In my mind, in my heart and in my hands.
As I look in your eyes this night.
For the future far away, my heart holds the plans.



-IO




posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 12:57 PM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

Awesome Poem Bud!! Who's the lucky Lady! Hmm? C'MOn Man, Bust It out!!!



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 01:01 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Thanks!!

Nope! You have to wait for the sketch in the art forum.....

Here is a hint that I think only yoy would be able to figure out. Its the female virsion of my real name!



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 01:04 PM
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originally posted by: SyxPak
Who's the lucky Lady! Hmm?

I'm a Poe fan and I read poetry dark.
I saw the lady as Lady Death, the soul mate of the poet.
That may not have been the intent.
But that's how I felt it.



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 01:24 PM
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a reply to: FlyersFan

I just wrote this one in a few seconds and posted.



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 01:25 PM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

Cool Man! I'm looking forward to seeing that Sketch!! And Yah, I know Her Name!! LOL!! (Wink WInk) LOL!!!
That's Fantastic Man! I'm tickled Pink for You!! LOL!!!



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 01:28 PM
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a reply to: FlyersFan

I'm bettin' She's not lady Death so much as Lady Life!!
Look at the way She makes Him feel!
That's a love Poem if I ever read one!
His Heart Bleeds for Her!

Well, You know. Just sayin'..... LOL!!!



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 01:40 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak


That's a love Poem if I ever read one!
His Heart Bleeds for Her!



The only "Death" is that you as 'dead on' with that comment



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 01:41 PM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

LMAO!!!!



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 01:42 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak
Those who want to be here will see Lady Life.
Those who look forward to whats next see Lady Death.
Death frees people.
Like I said, I read dark.



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 01:50 PM
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a reply to: FlyersFan

Well Yah I can see the darkness in all the light too.
So now I'm on the fence teetering each way!
Looks pretty silly right? Big ass Dragon on that little skinny fence!! LOL!!!
See This guy writes deep. Mine are more like Dr. Suess! LOL!!!



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 01:57 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

That is the true fun of any piece of art, sketched, painted or writen. No two people will identify the hidden meaning or true emotion behind it the same!!



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 02:03 PM
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That's a good one. I bet whoever you wrote that for loved it.



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 02:06 PM
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a reply to: Skid Mark

Uhm...



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 03:02 PM
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originally posted by: FlyersFan
I'm a Poe fan and I read poetry dark.
I saw the lady as Lady Death, the soul mate of the poet.
That may not have been the intent.
But that's how I felt it.


I'm totally with you on all of that. I'm also reminded of the Lovecraft quote; That is not dead which can eternal lie, and with strange aeons even death may die.

Excellent work.



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 03:21 PM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

great stuff
sweet, emotive imagery.

eta: it reminded me of a short verse of mine (well it was intended to be a song lyric),
which i will post here if you approve as it doesn't merit it's own thread.



edit on R2015th2015-03-15T15:44:05-05:0020150pm734 by RoScoLaz4 because: request if ok to post poem in thread



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 03:59 PM
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a reply to: RoScoLaz4

Sure, do share...



posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 04:12 PM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

thank you.


untitled

say goodnight my love
and close your eyes
we'll awaken under
crystal skies

just the here and the now
no future or past
your secret safe somehow
at peace at last

i'll take care of it all
you'll be painted and pretty
for as in life there's love
so in death there's pity




posted on Mar, 15 2015 @ 11:39 PM
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a reply to: RoScoLaz4

Thats good! I like it!



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