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Beauty Inside (Poem)

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posted on Mar, 8 2015 @ 05:50 PM
I just wrote this in a few seconds, so its not that good, but it does have true emotions behind it. I know its not the best, but still worth sharing, I think.

Beauty is truly in the eyes of the beholder.
It doesn't matter if you’re getting younger or older.

I don’t care about your body or your look.
It doesn't care if you can bake, or even cook.

It doesn't matter to me what you do.
What really matters is that you are true.

The beauty of you is in your eyes.
They speak the truth, they don’t know lies.

The smile that you give each time our eyes meet,
That warm hug you give me is always so sweet.

When you open your mouth, and speak to me.
Your words are so joyful, always so free.

It’s the beauty of your soul, splendor of your heart.
Your marvelous personality is a true work of art.
edit on 8-3-2015 by IndependentOpinion because: (no reason given)

posted on Mar, 8 2015 @ 08:59 PM
a reply to: IndependentOpinion

I think this is Fantastic!! Good Job Man!!

posted on Mar, 9 2015 @ 02:41 AM
a reply to: SyxPak

Thank you very much!!!

posted on Mar, 9 2015 @ 06:53 AM
a reply to: IndependentOpinion

That's nice , I like


Life can't always be sour.


posted on Mar, 9 2015 @ 09:17 AM
a reply to: my1percent

Thanks 1%

I actually considered not posting it up, because its not one of my best works. But I feel good about posting it up now, thanks to the good response I got.

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