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Your Voice (Poem)

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posted on Jan, 31 2015 @ 10:29 AM
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This has a very strange story behind it, but I thought I would share it!




When I heard your voice, coming out of my phone.
It sent chills through my body, and every single bone.

When I heard your voice, I could not believe my ears.
The beauty inside, almost brought me to tears.

When I heard your voice, it brought a smile to my face.
The splendour of it, made my heart race.

Your beautiful voice, I’ll never forget.
Of all the sounds, I haven’t heard sweeter yet.

When you ended the call, and your voice was gone.
I could still hear it in my mind, and the memory lives on.






posted on Jan, 31 2015 @ 10:54 AM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

Its a damned fine rhyme!

What's the skinny on its origin!?



posted on Feb, 1 2015 @ 07:11 AM
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a reply to: TrueBrit

A friend of a friend. Never met her in person



posted on Feb, 1 2015 @ 05:04 PM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

Ah. I see.

Are you likely to seek to alter that state of affairs? Or are you more of a mind to enjoy the fleeting wonder of the moment you described in such emotive terms, for what it is?



posted on Feb, 3 2015 @ 02:00 PM
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a reply to: TrueBrit



Are you likely to seek to alter that state of affairs?



I think so yes



posted on Feb, 3 2015 @ 03:43 PM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

Well then, I must wish you the very best of luck with that endeavour. May fortune smile upon you in your task!

Go get 'em!



posted on Mar, 6 2015 @ 12:11 PM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

Apparently I starred and flagged this when you wrote it, but did not comment? I Must have been having a bad day. Forgive My rudeness!! Very well written sentiment here IO! I like it!!



posted on Mar, 6 2015 @ 02:50 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Thanks Syx. No hard feelings at all.

I just hope I get my grove back like the older stuff I posted. Writer's block is horrible!!



posted on Mar, 6 2015 @ 03:01 PM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

You're Welcome! I know the writers block deal too! I am just now getting back into a groove of writing. I am working on another installment at The Shed 2. Drop in! You might like it there!! It is Fantasy, but It was easy enough for Me to pick up on it. It kind of blends real life with a fantasy element. Fun stuff for me anyway!!
You can enter some writings of your own into the story, once Ya figure out what is going on, or just hang out. There are some there who do not write in, but enjoy the works of others who do write into it......

Anyone can join us there!!!



posted on Mar, 6 2015 @ 03:35 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Thanks for the invite! I'll look around, but I don't think I'll join in. I'm not one for story writing (except the one I'm doing. LOL). And not really a fantasy writer.



posted on Mar, 6 2015 @ 03:47 PM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

I look foreward to seeing You there My Friend! Don't worry about not writing into the story. But, You might surprise yourself some day and do just that!!

Later!! Syx......



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