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[DRG2015] Purple Eyes

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posted on Jan, 25 2015 @ 10:40 AM
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There's been some talk around this desolate town
Lies a dragon in the hills who brings you down
She's mightily black with purple eyes
Has such beauty as she sails through the skies
One glitch just may occur while she's 'round
This drop dead beauty has no sound
She swoops down and kills with such ease
She has no one above her, no one to please
Her flames soar with a fiery scorn
Leaves tatters of remnants she's ever torn
Her flames blow scorching amongst the rubble
She has chosen her fate to see more trouble
Fly among the lowly with bitter humans
She shall demolish them all amongst the ruins
Turns and winks those lavender eyes
See her gliding through the empty skies



Peace to you
-nat the blue eyed cat




posted on Jan, 25 2015 @ 10:47 AM
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Very cool Nat! A lot of excellent imagery in this poem, good work!




posted on Jan, 25 2015 @ 10:55 AM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat
Hey thanks!!

I was up at 5 am this mornin changing words trying to make it a lil better

I appreciate your feedback



posted on Jan, 25 2015 @ 11:46 AM
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That sounds like one beautiful dragon!



posted on Jan, 25 2015 @ 11:51 AM
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a reply to: Night Star
Thanks night!! A beautiful dragon that likes to kill!!



posted on Jan, 25 2015 @ 02:46 PM
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Canny poem natalya!! It's a yes from me!!! Ur going to boot camp :-/ lolol



posted on Jan, 25 2015 @ 02:52 PM
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a reply to: natalia

Nice well written poem natalia



posted on Jan, 25 2015 @ 03:22 PM
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a reply to: natalia

A beautiful, silent, killing machine ... that was excellent, nat!

S&F and lots of these


B x



posted on Jan, 25 2015 @ 05:21 PM
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originally posted by: natalia
a reply to: Night Star
Thanks night!! A beautiful dragon that likes to kill!!




Well yeah, but he's...a dragon.



posted on Jan, 26 2015 @ 08:48 AM
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a reply to: Gingerstone

Thanks man!!


a reply to: Ophiuchus 13
Thank you very much



posted on Jan, 26 2015 @ 08:50 AM
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a reply to: beansidhe

Thank you my friend


a reply to: Night Star
Hahaha! Yup... We expect dragons to be killers.. Maybe I should've made her a healer !!
oh well. Thanks again!



posted on Jan, 26 2015 @ 10:30 AM
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a reply to: natalia

I love it!
Great poem, nice work.

If I read it again and pretend it's not about a dragon, I think I know some women that it describes very well, metaphorically speaking.


Thanks for sharing.



posted on Jan, 26 2015 @ 10:33 AM
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a reply to: InTheFlesh1980
Hahahahaha!!! Oh yes.. Some ladies can sure be described like in my poem

Thanks so much


edit on 26-1-2015 by natalia because: (no reason given)



posted on Jan, 26 2015 @ 01:45 PM
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a reply to: natalia

Hi Nat! That was an awesome Poem!! Full of Wonderful Imagery!!
I could picture that Beautiful Black Purple Eyed Female!!!
Just Fantastic Nat!!!

Fantastic Indeed!!! Syx.



posted on Jan, 26 2015 @ 01:46 PM
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a reply to: InTheFlesh1980

I hear Ya there ITF!! I as well some of Whom You speak!!! LOL!!! Syx.



posted on Jan, 26 2015 @ 05:15 PM
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a reply to: natalia

Nicely done my friend! The imagery was rich and like others I am glad I haven't crossed paths. I am a sucker for females with blue and lavender eyes. If I ran into her I guess you could say I would be toast!




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