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A Fighter’s Honour!

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posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 08:28 AM
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This is one I wrote based on a dream.


Before Your throne, I bow down to You.
Before Your servants, I bow myself down too.

You gave me a chance, to set things right.
You gave me Your Sword, to stand up and fight.

I fought and I lost, please forgive me!
I’m broken to pieces, can’t You see?

I fought for years, I needed to fight!
I fought to win, I thought that I might!

No man could slay me, no man could kill!
I did it to myself, thrown myself down the hill!

I bow myself down, here at Your feet.
I bow down in shame, I bow in defeat.

Be graceful to me! Show mercy onto me!
I want to live up, to what You want me to be!

Hear My words, the ones I’m telling you now:
“I grant you favour, for seeing you bow”

“Take My Sword up again, don’t lose heart!”
“I’ll stand by you, if you stand by Me, Never apart!”




posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 09:43 AM
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a reply to: IndependentAgent

Very moving!

Thanks for sharing,

STM



posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 10:07 AM
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a reply to: seentoomuch

Ah thanks!



posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 12:24 PM
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a reply to: IndependentAgent

Very Powerful!!! Take no shame in defeat.

Use it to fuel the Next Battle!!!
Syx.

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posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 01:35 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

If there is still breath in you,
There is still a chance to win!!

I.A



posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 03:39 PM
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Thats deep



posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 03:44 PM
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a reply to: Vidar24j

Not that old comment again! I get that enough from my family... LOL

I.A
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posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 03:48 PM
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Hahaha what ever



posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 03:56 PM
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a reply to: Vidar24j

LOL

I.A
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posted on Dec, 16 2014 @ 11:13 PM
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a reply to: IndependentAgent

I am full of Breath and I have an Idea that I am uncertain about. I am not sure how it will fly with Everyone......
Perhaps I may drop You a U2U on it?!
I am needing some feedback before I write it out......
Talk about DEEP!!!?? (It may be construed as disturbing to everyone......) It is to Me anyway......
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posted on Dec, 17 2014 @ 03:08 AM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Sure, you can drop me a U2U anytime!

I.A



posted on Dec, 17 2014 @ 03:22 AM
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a reply to: IndependentAgent

Ok cool. I wrote it out on paper earlier as My son had My PC for a while playing WOW.
I'll give You the cliff notes ina U2U.

Sending soon... Thanx. Syx.


ETA:
3:35 A.M. U2U sent......
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posted on Dec, 17 2014 @ 04:11 AM
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Nice!



posted on Dec, 17 2014 @ 06:10 AM
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a reply to: Phallacy

Hey there new-comer! Welcome to ATS! I hope you enjoy it here!







 
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