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Dear Child (Poem)

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posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 03:04 PM
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As I looked into Her eyes,
beautifully lit from within,
I couldn't help but notice,
the tiny cleft in in Her little chin.

Such a beauty She was,
and is still in every little way.
She continues to be source of amazement,
to Me this very Day.

How could one such as this,
still Love Me so unshakingly,
As I am full of problems,
that I certainly could not foresee.

At the time We first met,
trouble came at Me from hind and fore,
And never seemed to let Me rest,
and was always at My door.

She now shakes off My problems,
with an ease and all in stride.
She Loves Me unconditionally,
and is always at My side.

In the time that it has taken Her,
to grow to the Adult I knew She'd be,
She has always been My one True Love
and is the first Child born to Me.

To My Dear Daughter Jessica.

(She is alive and Well!)




posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 03:54 PM
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would be nice if all parents wrote a poem for their kids ( even if no talent )



posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 06:56 PM
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That is beautiful. You made me smile as your poem reminds me of my daughter. She is away at school and I miss her terribly.


S&F



posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 07:54 PM
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Awwww, beautiful!!!



posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 08:19 PM
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a reply to: palermoman

Never claimed to have talent. But I do like to write. The thought just came to Me to do one for My Daughter......
Syx.



posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 08:21 PM
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a reply to: nrthstar

Thanx! I am lucky and can see Mine nearly every day now. Her Mom and I moved closer to Her!
Left Our Home of over 23 years to do it!

It is worth it too!!!
Syx.



posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 08:22 PM
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a reply to: Night Star

Thanx for the Smile and Thumb's Up Night!!! See You in The Shed 2 !!! Syx.



posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 08:27 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak
Thanks, SyxPak
My first child, was my only daughter, as well.
They get plenty to handle when they inherit...us.

ETA: Oh - forgot to mention that I think your daughter got a good deal, too.

edit on 11/18/2014 by WanDash because: afterthought



posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 08:30 PM
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a reply to: WanDash

You are Welcome WanDash! I know right!? Kinda like most that know Me say like, "Getta load of that guy!" LOL!!! Suits Me fine! I like it that way!!

LOL!!
Syx.

ETA: I appreciate that too!! Was just checkin here B4 loggin off, and saw You had done an ETA. Thank You!!!
edit on 18-11-2014 by SyxPak because: (no reason given)



posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 08:41 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak Thats wonderful. Nothing like being close to your kids. I would move next to her in heart beat, but she will be moving home after her four years are over. In the mean time, seeing her once every couple of months will have to do.




posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 08:56 PM
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a reply to: nrthstar

Awww, Sorry!!! I didn't mean to spark sadness......
I don't have to tell You then, that just be sure to make every minute of those visits count!!! We only have one Family.
I did have some probs with My step daughter (not the one in this Poem.) for yrs though. Finally decided to just let it go. It's now better for Us all as We finally get along! Things have a way of working out in the end......
Poem HERE of My Step Daughter, If you care to have a read......



posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 08:59 PM
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Beautiful poem!!! my children are growing up so fast 😔



posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 09:04 PM
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a reply to: ladybug121

Thank You LadyBug!
I know right? They do grow up very fast!!!



posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 09:14 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak Please don't worry. I am sometimes sad, but I am so proud of her. I am her biggest fan and her support. So that positive outlook of her future and her accomplishments are my companions until she visits again.

I read your poem, boy what talent you have. S&F, I hope you don't mind I had to comment on the thread itself.

ETA: I agree with WanDash, your daughter got a good deal.
edit on 18-11-2014 by nrthstar because: (no reason given)



posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 09:21 PM
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a reply to: nrthstar

I appreciate the comments there, and here! Not too sure about talent, but I do like to write! It is like Therapy for Me!!

Your ETA and WanDash's make Me blush! Thank You!!


Your Daughter sounds like She is doing well so far. I would be Proud too, If I were You!
Syx.



posted on Nov, 18 2014 @ 09:30 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak I think we all need some avenue to let out our good, bad and the ugly.

She's a great young lady. Her head is on straight. She know exactly what she wants and is out to get it. She's a keeper and we are very proud of her.




posted on Nov, 19 2014 @ 12:28 AM
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a reply to: SyxPak

I couldn't even finish it. My eyes were welling up!



Great poem Syx!




posted on Nov, 19 2014 @ 11:55 AM
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a reply to: nrthstar


Your Daughter sounds like She has the Drive to Succeed! I hope She will!!! You have done Your job successfully It sounds in raising Her the right way!!!

Good Job!!!
Syx.



posted on Nov, 19 2014 @ 11:57 AM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat


I don't mind causing Happy Tears!
That in itself is a Great affirmation to Me that I did this one right enough!! Thanx!!!
Syx.



posted on Nov, 20 2014 @ 04:44 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

The bond between a father and daughter is a special one, this poem is beautiful!



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