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[SEC2014]Secret Underground Civilizations - November Writing Contest ###RESULTS ANNOUNCED###

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posted on Nov, 3 2014 @ 03:05 PM
a reply to: bigfatfurrytexan
I shall try..
I know little about writing short stories.. But I'm sure I can do something..
Good luck to all x

posted on Nov, 3 2014 @ 04:38 PM
[SEC2014] LAW and perfection

Be gentle.. if there is grammar issues ( english is sooo hard lol )

non writer status

posted on Nov, 3 2014 @ 05:18 PM

posted on Nov, 3 2014 @ 06:37 PM
I'm really looking forward to reading all these stories! Wow!

(sighs happily)

Keep up the good work. I'm so excited!!

- AB

posted on Nov, 4 2014 @ 01:09 AM
Since I am rebooting the main story I am working on

And I am getting better feed back from the short ones for now

Yeti Again (SEC2014)

posted on Nov, 4 2014 @ 06:46 AM
a reply to: ripcontrol

Psssst...You forgot to mention your writers status.

posted on Nov, 5 2014 @ 02:50 PM
a reply to: Night Star

I have yet to get more then applause stars and flags

Me winning this is a longer odds then powerball

I am trying to write good copy
and it is failing

By ATS rules I am a writer
By my own

I have not sold anything yet

Yall keep up the good work..

Remember dont force an idea let it develop

I finally realized what was wrong with Andros Colt and the trumpets of war

I moved somethings forward in an unrealistic manner

So after I Finish Yeti Again (SEC 2014)

I am going with a solid entry based on what I have seen is the preferred brand of story telling
And set it in the same universe I have been

posted on Nov, 5 2014 @ 03:14 PM
a reply to: bigfatfurrytexan

Is it secret underground bases or secret underground civilizations ? - the two are totally different things.

I have an idea fo a story if it's bases but not if it's a hidden whole civilization. ( Er.. unless I turn all my stories objects into people. LOL.)

edit on 5-11-2014 by JohnPhoenix because: sp

posted on Nov, 5 2014 @ 06:08 PM
a reply to: JohnPhoenix

I was lost on the same thinng

I said screw it and just wrote

I have no say in the contest
Just write it
And send me a PM and I will read

Sometimes confusion and misunderstanding creates the most beautiful pieces of work

posted on Nov, 5 2014 @ 07:13 PM
I finished the story

Now I think I may have one more short for this story

It fits in the contest...

I will see

posted on Nov, 5 2014 @ 08:40 PM
a reply to: JohnPhoenix

The individual who picked the topic said "civilizations", but elaborated to make it sound like any underground living situation.

I clarified the title of the thread to say "civilizations"....but I am not thinking that, practically speaking, an issue of semantics would pose a problem given that "military" and "area 51" were used in the elaboration on the topic.

posted on Nov, 5 2014 @ 08:58 PM
Here is my entry.

Writer status.

Myth's Mountain - The Legend is Real

edit on 5-11-2014 by OpinionatedB because: (no reason given)

posted on Nov, 5 2014 @ 09:58 PM
Slowly reading through entries. Is fun.

I'm not sure what the etiquette is on this part of the forum with critique etc ... personally I'm just getting back to experimenting with long form writing and any advice / criticism is awesome. Feel free to U2U and be as harsh as you like about anything I'm scribbling. Can probably just do it in thread too, I don't mind.

I'd offer the same to anyone else, though I'm not saying I'll be able to give amazing insight. But if I read your work, and you want to send questions / want elaboration on something let me know. Happy to provide amateur insight.

posted on Nov, 6 2014 @ 10:37 AM
My insomnia thanks you all for great stories so far !

posted on Nov, 6 2014 @ 10:48 AM
OK. Here's my Non-Writer Status Entry for the Contest! The Fixers

posted on Nov, 6 2014 @ 11:19 AM
a reply to: JohnPhoenix

Hey JohnPheonix, and anyone else,

BFFT did clarify it, and when I sent him the idea it was basically any kind of secretive underground arrangement - I did mention Area 51 and the "breakaway" civilization idea, as well as the caves of Ellora and the Lizard People of LA, so pretty much anything from ancients to aliens to military to ant-people are a "go."

Have fun! Can't wait to read it!


posted on Nov, 7 2014 @ 09:51 AM
A truish enough story, Deep Heart, by a writer of sorts.

posted on Nov, 7 2014 @ 11:05 PM
Here's mine. Non-writer and first attempt at a contest here on ATS.

Marcus's Mistake

posted on Nov, 11 2014 @ 12:30 AM
Too Late For the Pebbles to Vote (SEC 2014)

I hope you all love this

Its my halfway done story
next half should be done in the next few days

This is the first time I ever went into depth over this characters story as writer

edit on Tue, 11 Nov 2014 00:32:04 -060032p2014-11-11T00:32:04-06:0020141130Tue, 11 Nov 2014 00:32:04 -06002014Tuesday by ripcontrol because: writer status ... lol

posted on Nov, 11 2014 @ 01:22 AM
a reply to: ripcontrol

I really hate to tell you this but, if I'm not mistaken, we are only allowed one entry...

originally posted by: bigfatfurrytexan

1 Single Submission Per Member

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