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This mushroom called me.

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posted on Oct, 28 2014 @ 03:12 AM
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This mushroom called me.
Is not realy me
neither is it you.
It just a space
for love,
to dance, to move.
Only many dont know,
Stuck in a groove,
of becoming.
Imitation instead of loving.
Limitation and frustration.
Doing their best,
To get one over,
The rest.
Keep loving,letting go
of the trouble sowing.
See you in the river
of eternal flowing.
Eliberocelta 0ct 2014
edit on 28-10-2014 by ancientthunder because: signiture




posted on Oct, 28 2014 @ 03:31 AM
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a reply to: ancientthunder

nice poem
anything to add?


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posted on Oct, 28 2014 @ 06:26 AM
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posted on Oct, 28 2014 @ 06:30 AM
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Nice read OP.

a reply to: Eunuchorn
a reply to: LightSpeedDriver

Okay kids, We can turn this thread around and go right back home if you two can't behave yourselves back there.

I'd recommend watching Pink Floyd's The Wall or Heavy Metal.



posted on Oct, 28 2014 @ 06:38 AM
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a reply to: SLAYER69

Oh I can behave easily, S and F'ed but left no comment as the OP speaks for itself (IMHO). Just trying to prevent another member breaking T&C;s unnecessarily. Possibly not my best attempt....

OP: Nicely written.



posted on Oct, 28 2014 @ 09:03 AM
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a reply to: SLAYER69
Many thanks glad it was tasted, yes the word kids came to mind for me also. Must admit, I couldnt find anyway to answer them. Thanks lightspeedriver for giving it a go!



posted on Oct, 28 2014 @ 09:57 AM
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That is a great poem. That mushroom in the picture looks like a real fun guy



posted on Oct, 28 2014 @ 10:05 AM
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a reply to: 1MrMarc

I knew my pun detector led me here for a reason.

Great poem, OP. Love it!



posted on Oct, 28 2014 @ 10:09 AM
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a reply to: ancientthunder

I have to say... I normally skip these but I did rather like it. Well done.



posted on Oct, 28 2014 @ 02:29 PM
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a reply to: ancientthunder

It Looks Like Those Mushrooms Can Talk To you. Very Nice Poem, Great Job I Enjoyed It.



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