posted on Sep, 1 2014 @ 09:29 AM
' Concept is solid and sharp. This show is the sh*t about all the bullsh*t going on in the world. We are long over due for an informative and
edgy recap show that highlight's, identifies and exposes the turd scums that fill our TV toilets daily. #NLBS fulfills this need and will act as the
plunger that violently splashes society straight in the face.
I envision @theNLBS show will become a media power-play to take over MSM and become the one stop shop for a variety of target audiences, from teens to
millennials to baby boomers. It's genuine, real and authentic "taste and texture" give it the clout it needs to be the show that we all have been
The content, the delivery of the material and execution of the advertising support strategy will secure it's destiny but these three pinch points must
be concise and consistent in each episode. This is THE show this world needs right now.
Joe, your delivery is good and I can see you are becoming more comfortable in front of the camera. BTW, your production skills (editing/sound/images
selected/topics presented) are top notch quality and improvements here are limited at best. The only constructive critique I have is that it does
feel like you seem not that "upset/impacted" about all the bullsh*t going on. IMO, in the first BETA test you had greater passion about what you were
speaking of versus in the second BETA you could have shown more "personality/character" and increased your "pauses" hitting the key points harder and
at the right times to drive it home.
Last point - cursing.. I feel that when making a strong point/show your passion with a cuss word, saying it like you mean it. Don't bleep it out and
use it at limited times throughout the show.. when it really matters and when one feels so strongly about the BS that's presented. The curse word
helps drive that passionate feeling home and resonates with the audience giving us validation that it's seriously NLBS.
Good work my friend and I look forward to following you to the top.
edit on 9/1/2014 by CitizenSPY because: (no reason given)