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posted on Jul, 31 2014 @ 10:38 PM
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I walk through walls when I travel
To a midnight blood orange sky
Iridescent raindrops in soft motion
All discerned with my third eye

The astral world is tranquil
But not everything is as it seems
Creatures with out heads are hiding
Inside articulated trees

Madly twirl to change the scenery
Watch as fish swim in venetian glass
Jump as high as painted mountain tops
Then rest on undulating grass

Weightless flights to brilliant Luna
Imagination guides the course
The realm of out of body
A thread embroidered to our source



edit on 1-8-2014 by Jennyfrenzy because: fix image




posted on Jul, 31 2014 @ 10:41 PM
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Great picture. Great poem.



posted on Jul, 31 2014 @ 10:47 PM
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I always wanted to learn how to do an OBE. More meditation and focus should get me there right?

Nice poem, and pic! Any tips for OBEs?



posted on Jul, 31 2014 @ 10:50 PM
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a reply to: Pont52

Thanks! I'll send a U2U to you as soon as I get a chance. Made a tips and tricks OBE tip sheet for my friends. I'll send it your way


a reply to: karmicecstasy

Thanks so much and thanks for reading!



posted on Aug, 1 2014 @ 11:08 AM
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a reply to: Pont52

Check your messages, it's a little long but pretty thorough.

Safe travels



posted on Aug, 2 2014 @ 01:34 AM
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The silver chord



posted on Aug, 2 2014 @ 01:58 PM
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a reply to: zazzafrazz

It will never let you go, so travel and explore!




posted on Aug, 2 2014 @ 02:21 PM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

Beautiful!!! Loved it!




posted on Aug, 2 2014 @ 03:46 PM
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a reply to: Agartha

Thanks Agartha!




posted on Aug, 2 2014 @ 04:42 PM
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Nice words very well put.
I've had the occasional OBE which influenced me to attempt poetry for the first time. Your poem does it all justice, lovely.

Did you create the art as well?




posted on Aug, 2 2014 @ 05:16 PM
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a reply to: firesnake

Thank you!


I wrote it, inspired by my astral travels.



posted on Aug, 14 2014 @ 09:08 AM
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Very well done!



posted on Aug, 14 2014 @ 03:01 PM
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a reply to: abeverage

Thanks abeverage!

Hope you're having a wonderful summer



posted on Aug, 17 2014 @ 10:55 AM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

LOL I am not but thanks for asking!

Follow me here...vileyonderboy.deviantart.com...



posted on Aug, 21 2014 @ 04:21 PM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

Very well done! I had flashbacks to some of my astral travels while reading this! S+F For You!



posted on Aug, 21 2014 @ 04:22 PM
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a reply to: abeverage

Abe, I click the link. I liked the Pattern Recognition Poem You wrote there. Very Good!



posted on Aug, 21 2014 @ 05:18 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Thank you!

Love reading your beautiful poetry



posted on Aug, 22 2014 @ 08:28 AM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

Thank You Jenny!
I adore the depth of yours!!!
So enthralling! I love Your Poems!!!





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