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posted on Jul, 27 2014 @ 04:26 PM
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As I sit here,Forelorn,
I am confused of Something,
and Yes I am kind of Torn.

My Eyes see something
They think is Legit.
But my Senses tell me
it is all Bull $h!_!

Endless Proof
of This Subject can be found,
after doing some Searching,
just Looking around.

Videos show me
Someones Point of View.
But even then,
there's More than a Few.

After some Viewing,
I see it This Way
You see it as That.
In the end,
it's hard to tell
Where I am at.

So as I stated already
I'm Confused as Hell,
where all This Leads,
is Hard to tell......

But I will not Give Up!
I'm going to keep
looking around.
If I find out The Truth,
I'll tell of What I have Found.

But I have the Feeling
that The search for the Truth,
will Never End.
So Better use of my Time
would be,
to Be with Family, and Friends.
edit on 27-7-2014 by SyxPak because: (no reason given)




posted on Jul, 31 2014 @ 02:02 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

This poem reminds me of ATS!

Searching for the truth, different viewpoints and spidey senses.

Loved it, fun read!




posted on Jul, 31 2014 @ 08:18 PM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

Jenny Thank You!
It is indeed ATS that inspired this bit of Whimsy.


Koodo's and a Star for You, for reading between the lines.



posted on Jul, 31 2014 @ 09:04 PM
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originally posted by: SyxPak
...But I will not Give Up!
I'm going to keep
looking around.
If I find out The Truth,
I'll tell of What I have Found.

...

Don't tell it...
You'll just keep the rest of us confused.

Nice poem!
And... ...how... ...true
You almost have to give up hope of finding it... I think.



posted on Jul, 31 2014 @ 09:47 PM
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a reply to: WanDash

Thanx! If I do find the truth , this being ATS, Without pics, no one would believe me anyway! LOL! Syx.



posted on Jul, 31 2014 @ 09:51 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Well...you are a true ATS member.

Most excellent poem. I enjoyed it.



posted on Jul, 31 2014 @ 09:53 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak
A'i'n't that they truth!
I think most only want 'truth' if it aligns with what they already...believe/suspect.
Otherwise - too much work is required...to start afresh.



posted on Jul, 31 2014 @ 10:05 PM
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a reply to: Witness2008

From one True Member, to Another, Thanx!
I appreciate the Most Excellent Praise!

I am glad You enjoyed it.
Syx.



posted on Jul, 31 2014 @ 10:09 PM
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Great poem. It sums up ATS very well.



posted on Aug, 1 2014 @ 09:41 AM
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a reply to: karmicecstasy

Thank You for Your Compliment. I Appreciate It! Syx.



posted on Aug, 10 2014 @ 04:03 AM
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originally posted by: SyxPak
a reply to: WanDash

Thanx! If I do find the truth , this being ATS, Without pics, no one would believe me anyway! LOL! Syx.


I would believe you Syx



posted on Aug, 10 2014 @ 10:52 AM
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a reply to: Night Star

Thanx Night! Somehow I knew You would! You are a True Friend Indeed!!



posted on Aug, 10 2014 @ 12:48 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Family and friends? Hmph, if they were really my friends, they'd be on ATS, lol. (oh wait...you all are!!)

Awesome poetry my friend! The message? Yeah, I think a lot of us relate to that.
Always wanting to know what the 'truth' is...the constant searching...
I think you just wrote a new ATS anthem!

jacygirl



posted on Aug, 10 2014 @ 12:54 PM
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a reply to: jacygirl

LOL on The Anthem!!? Maybe huh? Hmmm, wonder if they would pay me for that? (Hmmm, nope, I bet it is in the T+C's that they own everyting already once You write it down here......) Dam. Just my Luck, eh? LOL!!!
But seriously, I wouldn't mind if they used it in their advertising really. As long as they credit me for it! LOL!!!
But where it says time better spent with Family and Friends, is NOT a selling point for them. They would rather You be HERE on their WebSite!! LOL!!!

Thanx Jacy!



posted on Dec, 17 2014 @ 03:30 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

This can be used as a theme song for ATS, but the last part my keep some users away from their computers for a bit.
Well done, it was fun reading, trying to find out what the punchline would be before I got to the end.



posted on Dec, 17 2014 @ 08:51 PM
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a reply to: IndependentAgent

Right on! I am glad it had You thinking all the way through. Goal Met!!!!!! LOL!!!
Syx.



posted on Dec, 18 2014 @ 03:37 AM
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a reply to: SyxPak






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