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This Fresh Mirage

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posted on Jul, 17 2014 @ 06:30 AM
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Every surface shimmers,
Under old Sol's gaze,
Here and there,
Reflected glimmers,
Wisps amongst the haze,

The Daystar unrelenting,
In these summer days,
Burns and turns,
Without repenting,
All beneath will be razed,

This fresh mirage,
Lifts its arms in praise,
Birthed in fire,
And looming large,
From the womb of old Sol's gaze.




posted on Jul, 17 2014 @ 07:24 AM
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a reply to: TrueBrit

Nice one bloke. Didn't mind that at all, nicely composed.

Kind Regards
Myselfaswell



posted on Jul, 17 2014 @ 07:33 AM
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a reply to: myselfaswell

Thanks Myselfaswell!

Jolly brolly of you to drop by!



posted on Jul, 17 2014 @ 07:52 AM
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a reply to: TrueBrit

It is fresh, and yet with traces of ancient celtic memories. Very beautiful, TB.

B x



posted on Jul, 17 2014 @ 07:55 AM
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Wow! LOVE this! Awesome!!!!!!



posted on Jul, 17 2014 @ 08:51 AM
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a reply to: TrueBrit

Wow, True...that is beautiful!
You have such a unique way with words...very talented.

This is where I get envious, lol...I rhyme...but you create poetry.
(I'm like Dr. Seuss, and you're more William Shakespeare).

*Humbly walking out, kicking stones and cursing foxes in boxes*

jacy



posted on Jul, 17 2014 @ 08:53 AM
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a reply to: beansidhe

Thank you very much for taking the time to comment!

I got entranced by the heat haze on the bodywork of some cars in the street, during my cigarette break. It's funny how mundane manifestations of physics, can play on the mind that way!



posted on Jul, 17 2014 @ 09:13 AM
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a reply to: Night Star

Thanks Night Star! I am really glad you liked it!

a reply to: jacygirl

Come on now jacygirl, you know you have "game" as the kids are saying these days!
edit on 17-7-2014 by TrueBrit because: Added corrections.



posted on Jul, 19 2014 @ 04:17 PM
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originally posted by: jacygirl
a reply to: TrueBrit

Wow, True...that is beautiful!
You have such a unique way with words...very talented.

This is where I get envious, lol...I rhyme...but you create poetry.
(I'm like Dr. Seuss, and you're more William Shakespeare).

*Humbly walking out, kicking stones and cursing foxes in boxes*

jacy




Ahahahaha!!!!!! You crack me up yet again!!!!



posted on Jul, 29 2014 @ 02:36 PM
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a reply to: TrueBrit


True Bud! I just found this.
A Very good read!
Once again, Great Job True! Syx.



posted on Jul, 29 2014 @ 05:58 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Thanks very much Syx!

I really appreciate the feedback!





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