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Doomsday By Design -- Collaborative Story [ WORKING THREAD] [Updated!]

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posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 12:15 AM
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a reply to: pheonix358 saw it .. looked good to me ..

did put some hints in regarding things back in japan when did the filler bit .. for the next few chapters leaving things to the other characters in the story .. watching to see what develops ..




posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 12:17 AM
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Nightangelus, check your u2u's!



posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 12:23 AM
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a reply to: Expat888

As soon as the door is opened, Sue-Lin will come to your Guy since he asked her to.

I liked the stuff about Japan. Later you can explain the losses.

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posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 12:29 AM
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No worries .. him and gozaimon arent going anywhere .. theyre keeping busy between training , the ongoing go game as a game often lasts a long time .. and ryujin sketching ..



posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 12:29 AM
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I think its possible the group is going to split into two groups, just for a little while, since Sue-Lin and Ryujin are going to meet up, and since everyone's motive for leaving the bunker is going to be based entirely on moral conflict (spoilers).

Getting ready to map out the transition, gonna write out how the outside world--which is now a big, unpredictable fallout world--is going to be open to the group once again.



posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 12:36 AM
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Interesting .. the possible split .. though ryujin wont allow himself to take sides as he is looking at a longer term picture trying to figure out how to build a better society that learned from the errors of the past .. looking forward to seeing how things develop ...
edit on 8/6/14 by Expat888 because: aaarrghh typo again ..



posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 12:42 AM
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Now we need to have everyone else chime in. Should be fun.

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posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 12:44 AM
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a reply to: Expat888

Have you ever watched a TV series called 'Stingray', just wondering.

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posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 12:46 AM
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Yes! I agree with both of you.

I'm currently writing the phase that's going to open the bunker, and put all the characters in a peculiar situation. Have you guys heard from the other players today? Because I have not.

EDIT; I'm going to wait for just a little bit before opening the bunker, gonna give everyone else a chance to take part first.


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posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 12:49 AM
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Heard from 727 earlier he in and out today taking care of things at his house .. last night heard from cagliostro .. thought saw wookie around bit ago ..sounds good want to see what the others do as well ..
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posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 12:50 AM
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originally posted by: Wookiep
Nightangelus, check your u2u's!


I did!

I replied.


Are you gonna play tonight?

Sorry for being pushy.



posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 12:54 AM
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No tv set .. last time wtched it was back in 80 .. not up on alot of pop culture and movies as out here mostly tend my garden , fish , try to keep my macaque from stealing my beer when not browsing ats ..



posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 12:58 AM
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originally posted by: Expat888
a reply to: pheonix358
No tv set .. last time wtched it was back in 80 .. not up on alot of pop culture and movies as out here mostly tend my garden , fish , try to keep my macaque from stealing my beer when not browsing ats ..


To have seen Stingray you would have been in front of a tv in the sixties. It actually had buildings that dropped into the ground to be replaced with missile batteries. Was as cool as, little light on the engineering required but still quite good.

I am going to have a lot of fun as Sue-Lin sets up over watch on your house before she moves in. She will be like WTF .... wheres the bloody house ....

She will work it out logically and be wrong!

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posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 01:02 AM
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a reply to: pheonix358 back in the 60s was in a little place called vietnam with s.o.g too busy trying not to get killed .. never been much on tv ..

Hehe looking forward to sue-lins confusion ..

Had got the idea from how they built the new osaka airport along with some of the devolpments on making building earthquake proof in japan ..
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posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 01:03 AM
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Alright.. I think I'm gonna write it now.

Stay tuned!



posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 01:11 AM
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originally posted by: XxNightAngelusxX
Alright.. I think I'm gonna write it now.

Stay tuned!


Read my last bit if you have not. Thanks. This is great.

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posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 01:18 AM
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Pm for you wookie ..



posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 01:19 AM
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a reply to: Expat888

Got it, replied.



posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 01:30 AM
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Just replied wookie .. lost track a moment had forgot sandra and sue-lin knew where ryujins house was ..



posted on Jun, 8 2014 @ 02:02 AM
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It would be better IMO to move the evacuation of the teams thread to before the chapter 2 post.. Dunno if anyone or mod has the horsepower to do that but it would button up chapter 1 in a more tidy way... I realize this is not brain surgery and maybe I am getting to fussy but it makes sense to me...




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