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Sacred Heart

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posted on May, 26 2014 @ 12:22 AM
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My first thread!!!! I know it's sappy, but I'm in love


I'd sever my limbs willingly
If u wanted them as prize

I'd set myself ablaze
For a sparkle in your eyes

Then I'd sew myself together
For a new appearance

If I could fool you for
Another second in your presence

But all that pain and suffering
Never would compare

To all the love I have for you
The love that we can share

There's endless love between us
Even more will have its start

Even when it goes unnoticed
I'm pouring love into your heart




posted on May, 26 2014 @ 12:31 AM
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a reply to: Samilton

Nice poem, I enjoyed it.

Looking forward to anything else you might share. The short stories forum has been a little slow recently, no help from me...

*le sigh*




posted on May, 26 2014 @ 08:38 AM
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a reply to: Samilton

Very nice writing samilton

I sure do love some good poetry and you have a nice talent of writing
thanks for sharing your work with us and continue to write ...
writing can help release what you feel ..IMO


Have a nice day
-nat



posted on May, 26 2014 @ 11:22 AM
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a reply to: Samilton

Sappy poetry is beautiful!

I really like it



posted on May, 26 2014 @ 12:55 PM
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a reply to: Samilton
Hi there. I liked that a
Lot. Poems from the heart are the best ones
Keep them coming



posted on May, 26 2014 @ 03:25 PM
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a reply to: Samilton

What a lovely poem! Read it several times, you've got talent!

Wish I had the guts to post my stuff but alas, I'm a chicken.



posted on May, 27 2014 @ 09:53 AM
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a reply to: Samilton
Oh and just to let ya know.. It's not sappy at all. It's a sweet poem with kinda a wicked twist in the beginning.. I truly did enjoy this one



posted on May, 27 2014 @ 09:56 AM
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a reply to: Samilton
Very nice poem Op
1 enjoyed keep up the good writing.

NAMASTE*******

edit on 5/27/14 by Ophiuchus 13 because: (no reason given)



posted on May, 27 2014 @ 03:07 PM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

Thanks. Looking forward to reading something from you.



posted on May, 27 2014 @ 03:20 PM
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a reply to: natalia

Thanks for the support Natalia. I enjoy your writing very much
...looking forward to your next poem.



posted on May, 27 2014 @ 03:24 PM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

Thanks Jenny. Glad you liked it.



posted on May, 27 2014 @ 03:28 PM
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a reply to: TheDoctor46

Thanks Doc. I like your writing also.



posted on May, 27 2014 @ 03:30 PM
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a reply to: LucidLucinda

Thanks for the compliment.


You should share some of your writing.



posted on May, 27 2014 @ 03:44 PM
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a reply to: natalia

Glad you enjoyed it



posted on May, 27 2014 @ 03:46 PM
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a reply to: Ophiuchus 13

Thanks Ophiuchus. I'll try to make them good.



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