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Cyclical Creation

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posted on May, 23 2014 @ 06:11 PM
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There is no end,
Not even a pause,
Our creations,
Defeat entropic claws,
Despite a closure,
The intention survives,
Nothing ends,
Not energy,
Not lives,
All that is,
All that ever will be,
Moves in circles,
Like you,
Like me.




posted on May, 23 2014 @ 06:25 PM
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a reply to: TrueBrit

Oh WOOOOOWWWWWW!
I can soooooo relate to that True.
Thank you
Rainbows
Jane



posted on May, 23 2014 @ 06:25 PM
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a reply to: TrueBrit

Simple, concise and very well written.

It's actually inspiring to guys like me.

The story never really ends. Just new characters show up to take over.



posted on May, 23 2014 @ 06:41 PM
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a reply to: TDawgRex

Like most of the things I tend to post, poetically speaking, this bit of blather can be applied both to the stated target of the rhyme, and to the wider aspects of existence. Energy never gets spent, it just gets distributed and reformatted. All the plants you see are growing on a skin of soil which is nourished by the ancient dead, and in the same cyclical fashion, The Shed is as cyclical as this universe, because it will continue, despite coming to a close.



posted on May, 23 2014 @ 06:44 PM
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a reply to: TrueBrit

But it will probably never have a ending.

It's just the new building upon the old. Like cities and civilizations.



posted on May, 23 2014 @ 07:02 PM
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Wonderful!



posted on May, 23 2014 @ 09:56 PM
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Nicely said my friend. Everything comes from energy, since energy cannot be created or destroyed everything is eternal, including you and I.

This life is only one facet of an infinite fractal. There's no such thing as death, only birth and rebirth. Everything works in cycles, including life itself. The lives we live right now are only one cycle among an infinite number of cycles all happening simultaneously.

S&F



posted on May, 24 2014 @ 06:13 AM
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a reply to: TrueBrit

Excellent as usual my friend. I do like your style



posted on May, 24 2014 @ 07:50 AM
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a reply to: TheDoctor46

Thanks Doc!

Glad that yourself and other posters enjoyed it!



posted on May, 26 2014 @ 06:43 PM
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a reply to: TrueBrit

Aww, you silver-tongued rascal...that was fabulous!!

I'm glad I didn't find it until now...I'm in the right place in my head, to really appreciate it.

*curtsies*

jacy



posted on May, 27 2014 @ 10:55 AM
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a reply to: TrueBrit
Nice job friend

I love the simplicity of it



posted on May, 27 2014 @ 11:19 AM
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a reply to: jacygirl

I am glad that you found it when fully able to enjoy it Jacy!

I hope that frame of mind continues!



posted on May, 27 2014 @ 11:20 AM
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a reply to: natalia

Thank you very much Natalia!

Glad you liked it!



posted on Jun, 27 2014 @ 05:21 PM
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a reply to: TrueBrit

Such a Deep Poem True! That made me feel like I got a Fresh Breath of Air!!!
It awakened something inside of me that is hard to describe...... Wow, I loved it!



posted on Jun, 27 2014 @ 05:29 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Hey Syx!

Thanks for saying so, and for stopping by to read it! I am really glad that you felt something from it, as that is one of the many reasons to write in the first place!

I really needed to hear something positive tonight, so thanks once again!



posted on Jun, 27 2014 @ 07:54 PM
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a reply to: TrueBrit
Thanking me for the post was not neccessary True, but very appreciated!
I always like reading your posts in other areas as well.
Very well thought out and written my friend!
Your writing and choice of words is, how can I say, Kool! LOL!!


Edit: And You are Very Welcome True!!
edit on 27-6-2014 by SyxPak because: (no reason given)



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