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Soulless

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posted on May, 21 2014 @ 03:56 PM
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"Pity on your soul... If I thought you had a soul."

Thank you for your inspiration

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Am I such a cold cruel creature
Ice the core of all my features
You think my frigid heart not whole
Yes, someone said I have no soul

Some are quick to sling torment
So full of hate and malcontent
Of my essence you've no control
Yes, someone said I have no soul

So on this lonely moonlit night
These frenzied thoughts I won't ignite
Firmly rooted no unpaid toll
Yes, someone said I have no soul

Am I such a cold cruel creature
Yes, someone said I have no soul

My spirit stands upon firm ground
My love for others is unbound
My heart is full my heart is whole
Yes, someone said I have no soul

It's you that I take pity on
Flogging others with your baton
Coldhearted jabs will take their toll
Yes, someone said I have no soul

One harsh day you will glance around
And find your gardens been cut down
Where once stood friends now just a hole
Yes, someone said I have no soul

My spirit stands upon firm ground
Yes, someone said I have no soul


edit on 21-5-2014 by Jennyfrenzy because: spacing




posted on May, 21 2014 @ 03:59 PM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy
Beautifully written.
You do have a soul.. I feel we all do... And I've seen your kindness..
You have a beautiful soul and a kindhearted one as well...

The poem is really good

I'm glad you shared it



posted on May, 21 2014 @ 04:03 PM
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a reply to: natalia

Thanks, Nat!

You have a beautiful soul too and I love when you share it!




posted on May, 21 2014 @ 04:05 PM
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I read that thread, nice to turn a snotty sentiment into art.

Well done!



posted on May, 21 2014 @ 04:09 PM
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a reply to: Elton

Thanks for your kind words!

Inspiration is everywhere



posted on May, 21 2014 @ 04:24 PM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

Great stuff Jenny. You sure can write. And it wont be long before that title of Writer "shalt be yours". Its great sometimes when someone or something pisses you off. It sets a great barrage of feelings into effect resulting in great writing
.....And if not you can always tell them to piss off anyway!!!



posted on May, 21 2014 @ 04:31 PM
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a reply to: TheDoctor46

This is so true, and it feels so good to get it out!

Thank you! You're awesome



posted on May, 21 2014 @ 05:51 PM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

Every poet has soul. Great work. Great read.



posted on May, 21 2014 @ 08:50 PM
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a reply to: LesMisanthrope

Thank you so much.

Poets do have soul!



posted on May, 21 2014 @ 08:55 PM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

Starred and flagged, Jenny. I feel the passion in your words...keep it up.



posted on May, 21 2014 @ 09:00 PM
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a reply to: queenofsheba

Thank you friend





posted on May, 21 2014 @ 11:30 PM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

From what I read sounds like you've got soul. Enjoyed it.




posted on May, 22 2014 @ 12:06 PM
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a reply to: MiguelTheMagician

Thanks for the words of encouragement!




posted on May, 22 2014 @ 05:27 PM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

You're welcome, really enjoyed reading it.



posted on May, 26 2014 @ 03:39 PM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

Sometimes people can be so mean, nice way to turn it around. Wish people would uplift each other instead of being so nasty when someone disagrees with an opinion.

Its a beautiful poem, Jenny



posted on May, 26 2014 @ 03:43 PM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

I miss the thread you mentioned, but nobody here thinks you have no soul......all the contrary.
I think you are a gentle, kind and funny young woman.

And keep up the writing, you definitely have a gift there!!
S&F



posted on May, 26 2014 @ 04:33 PM
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a reply to: Agartha

Thanks for you sweet comments, Agartha
You're awesome!

a reply to: LucidLucinda

Thanks, Lucinda!



posted on Aug, 31 2014 @ 04:19 AM
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a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

S+F Jenny!! This is Great Writing! I'm sad it took me this long to find it!

"One harsh day you will glance around
And find your gardens been cut down
Where once stood friends now just a hole"

I know someone personally this fits perfectly!
Wait till She hears me say it to her!! (Ummm, can I borrow it?)



posted on Aug, 31 2014 @ 10:59 AM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Please do and thank you!




posted on Oct, 15 2014 @ 10:08 PM
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Truly excellent poem, love it.



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