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White Knight (poem)

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posted on May, 16 2014 @ 05:57 AM
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White Knight (poem)

Save me! The woman cries,
Tears freely flowing from her eyes,
She throws her hands up in the air,
Falls to her knees, in despair.

Her face now buried in her hands,
She doesn't even see the man,
As he rides up on his mighty steed,
And pulls her up from on her knees.

What seems to be the problem miss?
Whatever it is, I will assist.
Have no fear, I'm here now,
I will save you, just tell me how.

Through sobs and outbursts of despair,
She tells him life is so unfair.
She just wanted a Gucci clutch,
She didn't think that was asking much.

He listened with great intent,
As she relayed the whole event,
Of how someone stole her identity,
And went on a shopping spree.

Now her money was all gone,
And she just couldn't carry on,
Gucci shoes and no matching purse,
Her life just couldn't get much worse.

Fear not, My lady, I know what to do!
Forget the purse and return those shoes!
While you're at it, hock those rings,
Quit spending money on frivolous things.

Jump up onto my fearless steed,
I know where we can do those things,
And when we're done, we'll ride out west,
And I'll teach you 'bout true happiness.

Bowing his head, he holds out his hand,
Excited he'd come up with a plan.
He would save this woman from strife,
And then he'd make her his lovely wife.

Minutes ticked by upon the clock,
After a few, he said, WTF!
Raising his head to see what was wrong,
He found the woman to be long gone.

He sighs as he prepares to leave,
Shedding his armor, releasing his steed.
He jumps into his Mercedes Benz,
Vowing never to be the white knight again.



Thanks,
Blend57

edit on 16-5-2014 by blend57 because: Spelling

edit on 16-5-2014 by blend57 because: (no reason given)




posted on May, 16 2014 @ 06:37 AM
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a reply to: blend57

Nice work!

Sorry to be "that guy", but you are referring to a knight and not the opposite of day. (you forgot the k on knight :--))



posted on May, 16 2014 @ 06:41 AM
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a reply to: andr3w68


Um...yes...ty for being "that guy"...I fixed it I think...



posted on May, 16 2014 @ 06:45 AM
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a reply to: blend57

No problem. I would rather point these things out courteously rather than have someone bash you for it.

As before, nice poem.

I posted one about a week ago, and if you are interested you can check the link below. :-)

www.abovetopsecret.com...



posted on May, 16 2014 @ 06:45 AM
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a reply to: blend57
Love it!! That's awesome blend. I enjoyed that one


Well ... I enjoy all your work actually

Thanks for writing and sharing
Your friend-nat



posted on May, 16 2014 @ 06:48 AM
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a reply to: andr3w68

I read it and enjoyed it. I would star and flag it....but you can't do that twice
It was a well done piece...



posted on May, 16 2014 @ 06:54 AM
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a reply to: natalia

Thank you, dear friend. I appreciate you letting me know. Just started writing again after a long hiatus, so...they might be a little rough...lol

Hopefully I'll be able to write some good ones after a while.

Blend57



posted on May, 16 2014 @ 06:55 AM
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a reply to: blend57

I was pretty proud as it was the first poem I can remember ever writing. lol.

Just goes to show you what a late night smoke/think sesh can spew.



posted on May, 16 2014 @ 06:59 AM
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a reply to: blend57
Oh you.. All your work is good.

No roughness about it.. Smooth sailing from here


You got the talent my sweet friend
-nat



posted on May, 16 2014 @ 10:18 AM
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a reply to: blend57

Excellent stuff as always blend. I enjoyed it all



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