Late night Lyric writing turned into a poem

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posted on May, 11 2014 @ 07:16 AM
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Greetings Ats been a while since I have posted something.

I was up late the other night trying to create some new lyrics for a metal band I joined about a year back and something odd happened. I was working on concepts for a specific song when I just had this urge to start writing, the words just popped into my mind and I finished it within a couple of minutes prior to the spurt of ideas. I decided to post it here for some insight and opinions. Hope you guys like it


Hemispherical coagulation transforming solidity into dissimulation
Aesthetic propagation eradicating artificial regeneration
Loss of conceptual content rephrasing the lack of intent
Deepening self inhibition of reprieve empathetic loss to deceive
Hindering in the constructs of enlightenment lies the vibratory pulse of endearment
Formation in systematical creation ensuing simultaneous reverberation
Logical linear reasoning fusing with imaginative lateral sweetening
To form the formless mold of space in a vacuum without a revolutionary trace
Consciousness born from a whispering tone of singularity lost through the illusion of disparity
All the numbers and fragments that remain for one whole of the everlasting same.




posted on May, 11 2014 @ 07:41 AM
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a reply to: FreeThinkerbychoice

I like it!

Sounds like the lyrics to like an Archspire or Rings of Saturn song. Technical Death metal or something. Good writing.




posted on May, 11 2014 @ 04:31 PM
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originally posted by: CagliostroTheGreat
a reply to: FreeThinkerbychoice

I like it!

Sounds like the lyrics to like an Archspire or Rings of Saturn song. Technical Death metal or something. Good writing.



Thanks so much appreciate it, those bands are damn good at what they do.



posted on May, 12 2014 @ 06:25 PM
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a reply to: FreeThinkerbychoice

That's awesome.

But I read it as a hip hop type rhyme. Very nice.



posted on May, 13 2014 @ 05:34 PM
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originally posted by: natalia
a reply to: FreeThinkerbychoice

That's awesome.

But I read it as a hip hop type rhyme. Very nice.


Why thank you





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