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originally posted by: mysterioustranger
Im not doubting the story, but have my reservations as to its validity. And Ill tell you why:
I am suspicious of any second person account of so many specific details as though that person was there to observe. ie: "He said then..." And "After that he..." You werent, and you werent there through all his reflections.Yet, you write so specific...that Im suspicious of just how exact on details you can be.
That implies...IMPLIES mind you...that its a written piece. Either you taped his entire account to you plus your own...or it was written out. Most people...especially the "other' person...can hardly relate in such detail. So, in that Im suspicious.
As a writer, it was very good. As a story...just as good. Im not saying its not true, just suspicious. Now if HE wrote it out with all the details youve provided....I'd think differently.
Ive written and published 4 novels, a childrens fairy tale and composed many lyrics and poems...so I think Im qualified to make the observation Im making after reading what you have written.
originally posted by: douglas5
a reply to: Jesuslives4u
MMhh would you like fries with that why does it matter what car he was driving / picked up in .
They are pretty common in Germany Richard
Like Ford in America
good story though
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.....and and and but after reading the comments I have changed my mind.
So........nothing to see.......move to the next thread.