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The Serpent

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posted on May, 6 2014 @ 04:29 PM
Deep in the woods I heard the serpent’s hiss

While minding my own business trying to take a ….picture

I backpedaled and couldn’t stop my fall

Thank Heavens though; it almost bit my ….leg

All this had me gasping and in shock

I needed a companion to stroke my ….ego

I lay for a minute in a breathless gasp

Then I stood up and had to scratch my ….head

My mom gave me the camera because I mentioned it

But all my pictures look just like …..They’re out of focus

My Mother shouldn’t give me everything I want

I may love her, but she’s a silly ….goose

posted on May, 7 2014 @ 07:00 AM
My my my... nice idea and all, but the "story" is so incoherent. If it would make more sense as a whole and the implied rhymes weren't so obvious, it might actually turn into something amusing.

posted on May, 7 2014 @ 09:07 AM
a reply to: mymymy

I thought this was neat.
Thanks for sharing

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