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posted on Apr, 28 2014 @ 06:56 AM
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My hubby wrote this poem not too long ago and shared it with me. He said he couldn't finish it...so I tried.. And here I am sharing it with you guys. Hope you enjoy. He wrote the first ten lines and where the lil "*" is.. That's where I tried to finish it.


~A blue little boy and a blue little girl
Grew up together in a strange strange world

Alone, together, they created a boy
Who saw the world as his toy

Where they saw black he saw white
Where they saw dark he saw light

Deciding to see through his eyes
They adorned a little boy disguise

The world was new the sun was warm
Roses were red without thorns

* Blue little boy and blue little girl
Danced around and did a twirl

Since their eyes were new ..seeing through
Everything was old but perfectly new

Flaming trees swayed violently around
Then gently swayed to the ground

First was last and last was first
Drinking rain with a great thirst

Time had come to go back to plain
Where everything was rightly insane

Thank you for reading.




posted on Apr, 28 2014 @ 07:22 AM
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Beautiful!

I especially liked: "...since their eyes were new...seeing through
everything was old but perfectly new..."

Just like how differently we see things when we change our attitudes.

S&F to you and hubby!



posted on Apr, 29 2014 @ 12:21 AM
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a reply to: natalia

Excellent poem! Your husband has the same talent you do, Natalia.



posted on Apr, 29 2014 @ 06:52 AM
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Thank you two for commenting





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