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Don't (poem)

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posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 01:40 AM
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Don't look at me
I'll shatter like glass
Don't talk to me
Please move on past
Don't laugh at me
Our differences are vast
Don't judge me
I'll still come in last
Don't
Just don't

Wrote this a while back found it flipping through a notebook and figured I'd share it.


edit on Cam2Wednesday5920142130Wed, 23 Apr 2014 02:59:21 -05002014 by CagliostroTheGreat because: add poem to title




posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 01:42 AM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

I like it. It has a continuity.



posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 01:45 AM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

I like it too, definitely relatable right about now.



posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 01:49 AM
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originally posted by: brazenalderpadrescorpio
a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

I like it. It has a continuity.


Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. I remember just writing the word "don't" at the top of the page. It is short though. Honestly I don't think it was even finished but whatevs...




posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 01:51 AM
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originally posted by: Jennyfrenzy
a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

I like it too, definitely relatable right about now.


Yeah, I was trying to go for that vibe, I think. At least one of the stanzas should resonate emotionally with any myriad of readers. Thanks!




posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 01:53 AM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

It's of good quality, even for its shortness.



posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 02:36 AM
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I enjoyed it too!



posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 02:41 AM
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originally posted by: Night Star
I enjoyed it too!


Glad you liked it and thanks for taking the time to read!




posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 08:21 AM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

I also enjoyed it. Nice work



posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 11:36 AM
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S&F from me...

How many people have never felt this kind of vulnerability, the tinge of shame that goes with it, and the hope of invisibility? It is powerful to shine a light in the dark, so that our inner, most fragile selves, know we are having a shared human experience. Good to know its not just me...


peace,
AB



posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 01:27 PM
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Nice short and to the point!




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