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Escaping God

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posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 09:11 AM
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originally posted by: ImaFungi
maybe insinuate this cycle of endless seeking ignorance and seeking knowledge, unless without this, that is what your story does.


This short story is actually a tie-in to my yet-to-come trilogy of novels. And yes, in this trilogy I hope to explain how everything could simply be indeed an endless cycle... I hope I can find the courage to write it some day. And the time.

Nice to see you again, BTW.




posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 05:11 PM
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originally posted by: swanne
Oops, I just noticed there are critical typos in the OP version. On chapter 6 and in the end of chapter 5, the name of the boy is supposed to be Nathan, not Mitchell. Plus, less important but still bugging me, in Chapter 1 I forgot to put the first letter of second scientific names in capital; and I misspelled "yogurt".

Okay, let me rectify it.

All right, there we go. All solved. Now this is the true Escaping God story:

Erm...wouldn't it have been easier to simply edit the originals, rather than repost?
edit on 23-4-2014 by LucidWarrior because: typo



posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 06:06 PM
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originally posted by: LucidWarrior
Erm...wouldn't it have been easier to simply edit the originals, rather than repost?


I wish. But I was too late - my 4 hours were up.



posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 08:27 PM
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a reply to: swanne

I agree!
Many regions on the north and south shore are beautiful, I love Charlevoix.

Montreal is older, it has its charm. Its a party destination and you can sight see, but its a city.



posted on Apr, 23 2014 @ 08:36 PM
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a reply to: swanne

ah, lol. Yeah, that 4 hour window does suck.



posted on Apr, 24 2014 @ 06:31 AM
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a reply to: LucidWarrior

Yeah, Tell me about it.


edit on 24-4-2014 by swanne because: (no reason given)



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