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originally posted by: ImaFungi
maybe insinuate this cycle of endless seeking ignorance and seeking knowledge, unless without this, that is what your story does.
originally posted by: swanne
Oops, I just noticed there are critical typos in the OP version. On chapter 6 and in the end of chapter 5, the name of the boy is supposed to be Nathan, not Mitchell. Plus, less important but still bugging me, in Chapter 1 I forgot to put the first letter of second scientific names in capital; and I misspelled "yogurt".
Okay, let me rectify it.
All right, there we go. All solved. Now this is the true Escaping God story: