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Poetic Verse

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posted on Apr, 11 2014 @ 04:12 PM
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Some poems of mine.


One

I am one with the universe
its stars and moons
its' myriad of color and light
even the blackest of nights has its silver diamonds dancing.


Lost Love

Still, the tears fall
for lost memories in time
for two hearts that tried too hard for too long
for love as it could have or should have been
but never will
File the experience under love in the farthest corner of your soul
and continue your journey in life
never knowing where it may lead
or who you may become
and hold on to the beacon of hope
as it flickers in the distance
for the dreamer of dreams.




edit on 11-4-2014 by Night Star because: (no reason given)




posted on Apr, 11 2014 @ 04:34 PM
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Oh wow, sweetie...those were beautiful!
The second one almost made me cry.
I think you're very talented. I can't write like that at all. I've actually been contemplating this very thought for a couple of days, and I've come to the conclusion that I'm no longer a romantic. I think I used to be. But it's just not there.
Maybe I'm still somewhat 'numb' from everything I've gone through. I'm not cynical or jaded.
Just not romantic.

So when I compliment your writing, I really mean it.
I can rhyme, but it ain't purty, lol.

jacy



posted on Apr, 11 2014 @ 04:47 PM
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Thank you my sweet friend! I really appreciate that!!



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