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Solitude...Some poems

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posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 01:42 AM
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Couldn't share this in the writers section, kept getting the message that I didn't have permission to post there or something. So I'll share this with you guys here.

Solitude

The poet and the artist,
imagery and verse,
their sentiment mirrored
in a heart that really loves you.

Snow falls like silent magic
and somewhere in the darkness
stars hang lonely on their velvet empty stage
as I revel in the solitude
and precious thoughts of you.
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posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 01:45 AM
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And another...

Enchantment
I've lost count of the tears that have fallen,
crystal droplets of regret
since you've been gone.

There was a time when hearts touched
and memories were made,
but too easily did we walk away
into the silence and shadows.

Sometimes we find ourselves
so easily tangled in the web of life,
but still I love you and wanted you to know
love's enchantment beats fierce and deep
within a heart that never sleeps.



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 01:49 AM
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Hope

What is this strange sensation
that lifts our lives
above the darkness,
past shattered dreams and illusions,
past all-consuming fear and pain
that dwells within us all?

What is this strange sensation
that lurks between the shadows and the light
and wakes the dormant soul?
This thing called hope.



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 01:52 AM
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In Silent reverie
I think of days gone by,
of wishes on wings,but never meant to be.

Waves crash down,
rolling thunder,
natures' song,

and in the darkened chamber
the ever longing
of a heart too sorrowful to speak,
these pinions of hope beat
like the love
within the dream
that never died...



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 02:10 AM
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reply to post by Night Star
 


I think you need "Writer" status to get to open threads there.

You certainly deserve to have that status.

Nice work !!




posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 02:13 AM
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Awwwww, thanks so much!!!! Yeah, but don't you have to win a contest first? I tried searching info for that. I'll never get writers status if I have to win a writers contest! Good Lord, too many awesome writers around here!



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 02:33 AM
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((((Night)))) Tis the fabled Day After, actually same one for me but Calandorically Next......
Very Nice Penmanship Night! Those are Beautiful! I wanna see some More, More!!! I'll try to hang for a few more mins, hopin You come back by so I can at least Thank You again! Am Shed Bound Hun.



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 03:30 AM
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Thank you Sweetie! Glad you had a nice Birthday! I don't know about writing more. Perhaps in time.



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 03:53 AM
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Lovely poems ! No,you do not need to win a contest to get writers status. It does however need to be granted to you by a mod. A u2u to either tothetenthpower or masqua could help you out there. No need for poetry to get buried in chit chat when it belongs in the writers forum.



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 04:39 AM
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Aww, sweetie...your poetry is beautiful, but so sad.
I agree, you deserve writer status here. Writers have different styles, and I certainly can't express myself in the way that you can.

While yours tugs at the heart-strings....I'm more likely to write: You crapped on our love from far above, you miserable lying SOB, and you're girlfriend fell from the 'ugly' tree....lol...
S&F&*hugs*
jacy


C'mon friends and family...let's support our sister here!
The way movies keep re-hashing the same old tired stories over and over...I'm thinking that new writers must be encouraged!
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posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 06:23 AM
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Lovely poems. But to agree with the rest, you should keep going.

As long as someone enjoys what they do. In the end it's going to be about what you make of the opportunity presented before you. Continue or don't your call. Just be aware the people here are supporting you.




posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 09:20 AM
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OMG Night!

I didn't know you were a poet? I love these! I agree with the others, you definitely deserve writer status!

Well done!




posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 12:54 PM
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AccessDenied
Lovely poems ! No,you do not need to win a contest to get writers status. It does however need to be granted to you by a mod. A u2u to either tothetenthpower or masqua could help you out there. No need for poetry to get buried in chit chat when it belongs in the writers forum.


Thank you! I am truly honored and shall do that.



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 12:56 PM
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While yours tugs at the heart-strings....I'm more likely to write: You crapped on our love from far above, you miserable lying SOB, and you're girlfriend fell from the 'ugly' tree....lol... - See more at: www.abovetopsecret.com...


Hahahahahaha! That cracked me up!!!

Thank you so much my dear friend! Much appreciated!!!



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 12:56 PM
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Lovely poems. But to agree with the rest, you should keep going.

As long as someone enjoys what they do. In the end it's going to be about what you make of the opportunity presented before you. Continue or don't your call. Just be aware the people here are supporting you.



Awwww, thanks so much! Means a lot to me!!



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 12:58 PM
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Thank you Sweetie! I am truly honored!!!



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 02:20 PM
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Night Star
Hope

What is this strange sensation
that lifts our lives
above the darkness,
past shattered dreams and illusions,
past all-consuming fear and pain
that dwells within us all?

What is this strange sensation
that lurks between the shadows and the light
and wakes the dormant soul?
This thing called hope.


They are all beautiful, but the above touched my soul........you have a gift indeed.....the gift of poetry and deserve the 'writer' status. Thanks for sharing.



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 03:00 PM
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Thank you so very much! It means a lot to me!



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 03:38 PM
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Night Star has writer status!! (Good call, Mods)


Now, sharpen that pencil and show us what you've got, girlfriend!
Just 'bumping' your thread back up to the top, hehe....it's what we do!

jacy



posted on Apr, 10 2014 @ 05:22 PM
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Absolutely wonderful!



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